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Review #1, by Demonic Angel Hogwarts

13th March 2004:
Another good chapter...looking forward to the next. To answer your question on what a 'Mary-sue' or 'Gary-stu' is, they are an OC that is equally or even more powerful than the main cannon character, they are instantly liked and befriended by every cannon character, and they and they always have the perfect body to make the opposite sex (and sometimes same sex if slash) suddenly attracted to them. They never make mistakes, say stupid things, or do anything wrong......they are perfect. So far I don't see any of this in your characters, which makes it still an enjoyable story. Keep up the good work

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Review #2, by Demonic Angel Hogwarts Express

29th February 2004:
Pretty good so far. I like that you haven't 'Gary-Sued' your OCs at all in this. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. I have completed the next chapter with the exception of the Sortng Hats song. Right now I am rather tempted to abandon the song all together. Could you please explain the expresion 'Gary-Sued' itis one I am not familier with. Thanks.

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