Reading Reviews for The Lake Journal
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by harmony Three Little Words/Pass The Juice

4th October 2008:
Ok so I like it but you use she to much.I still think it has great poitential though

Author's Response: was fixed in editing!

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Review #2, by harmony The Journal/The Hand That Feeds You

4th October 2008:
ok I'm a bit confused,but also insterested

Author's Response: thanks! i rewrote some of this chapter though so...yeah. lol

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