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Reading Reviews for Love Agianst the Will

5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LDLEEDS

26th May 2009:

Heyy, I saw you favourited my story so I thought I would come check out your stuff :)
Interesting start - the only things I could say maybe check your grammar and vary your sentances every so often.. x

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Review #2, by Christy86

Hide and Seek

2nd January 2009:

UPDATE SOON CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS GOOD WRK

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Review #3, by hplover123

Rememberable Kiss

3rd November 2008:

this is soo good
i love it!!! (:

Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw.

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Review #4, by kjodraco

Train Shocked

26th October 2008:

Sounds interesting so far but I would suggest getting a beta to check on some of your grammar.

Author's Response: thanks for the suggestion and review.

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Review #5, by Lovehurtssoul

Hide and Seek

21st October 2008:

Ok, I read all the story and I'm a tiny bit confused. I like the bare bones of it, but it seems a little rushed. Plus I got really confused when chapter 6 came around. Was the italics of any significance? Might need quite a bit of editing.

Author's Response: I copied and pasted the story. So i have to go back and edit it. thanks for alerting me of the random Italiced words.

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