The switching point-of-views is wonderful. I enjoy how you've kept Malfoy and Hermione true to their characters. You have a descriptive, fluid style of writing.
I am excited for the next chapter!Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy that =D I thought it would be a little harder to do that than it ended up being, hehe.
I hope to get one out once I finish the short story I'm doing . Report Review
looks like draco is either going to have to protect her or he is going to have to explain why he is warning her heheh
interesting chapter cant wait to see what happens nextAuthor's Response: glad you liked it =D Report Review
o so they came for hermione and unbeknowest to her draco saved her
that was an interesting chapterAuthor's Response: glad you thought so ^^ Report Review
definatly an interesting chapter i wonder what assignment draco was givenAuthor's Response: dundundundun :P Report Review
o i liked the chapter
i really liked your description of hermione that was really neat and i liked how you described draco that was awesome :DAuthor's Response: I'm really glad you liked those descriptions!! =D I love describing stuff ^^ Report Review
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