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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by daetymstories

3rd November 2008:

The switching point-of-views is wonderful. I enjoy how you've kept Malfoy and Hermione true to their characters. You have a descriptive, fluid style of writing.

I am excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy that =D I thought it would be a little harder to do that than it ended up being, hehe.

I hope to get one out once I finish the short story I'm doing .

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Review #2, by gitgit

Deceitful Attempts

3rd November 2008:

o interestign
looks like draco is either going to have to protect her or he is going to have to explain why he is warning her heheh
interesting chapter cant wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: glad you liked it =D

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Review #3, by gitgit

Duties and Missions

3rd November 2008:

o so they came for hermione and unbeknowest to her draco saved her
that was an interesting chapter

Author's Response: glad you thought so ^^

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Review #4, by gitgit

The Beginning of the End

3rd November 2008:

definatly an interesting chapter i wonder what assignment draco was given

Author's Response: dundundundun :P

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Review #5, by gitgit

One Last Time

3rd November 2008:

o i liked the chapter
i really liked your description of hermione that was really neat and i liked how you described draco that was awesome :D

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked those descriptions!! =D I love describing stuff ^^

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