good. like it. you might want to put sapaces in between your para. I think you are a good writer and should keep it up. if you would like to R&R my story that would be most helpful. It called The Return of Harry Potter. thank you. Report Review
it said there was no words, but i see words! goodbye hitler! Report Review
So powerful...so moving...reminds me of a script I wrote a few hours ago, but not nearly as good as yours. I love how you ended it. Poor Sirius. Report Review
Oh, Sirius is so brave! I like the characters you've developed, but I thought that you would talk about the year a bit more, and maybe start detailing a few of the pranks. (I know "detail" is not a verb, but I couldn't think of a better word) Report Review
wow, this is a brilliant story. sirius black is the greates man who ever walked the planet (remus and james close behind him, pettigrew riiiight at the bottom of the pile) i gonna read your behind the bars one now. oh yeah, please read+review mine, its called something wicked this way comes.... and its under recently added. keep up the good writing! Report Review
read and review essence of you life by shiseidox or she will delete it!!!! Report Review
Best one I've read so far about Sirius' past. Report Review
Is that all? Write more! Report Review
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