Ok, magicinthemoonlight29, here's another momentum-pusher. It's been a really really long time since you updated this, and I've been wondering if we're going to see this story finished. It's a favorite of many, and still a favorite of mine. So ... what do you think? Come on ... you can do it! It's a good one. We want to know what happens. Please, finish it for us!Author's Response: Hello love,
Thank you for this review. I think what I'll do is try to wrap this story up in one/two more chapter(s), because unfortunately I have lost motivation and ideas.
I do know an appropriate way to end it, I believe. I'll try my best to get this done for you. Nothing is worse than an unfinished story - Trust me, I know your pain. I've been checking a few stories for YEARS and nothing.
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Hi there, me again. Girding you on, trying to give you encouragement to finish this story once and for all. It's been months since your last review, but at least people have been chiming in. We'd LOVE for you to finish this one. It's a favorite of quite a few people. Please ... we want to see what happens to them! Be determined like Rose ... do it!Author's Response: Lovely Solana - Thank you so much for not giving up on me. I am making this promise to you, right now, that I will go back to this story come Winter Break. I will have nothing but time then, and I remember writing nearly a chapter a day last year on one of my stories! This is my promise to you - Hold me to it!
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I love your story so far! It's wonderful :)
Please update soonAuthor's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I'm hoping to get to ALL of my stories during my fabulously long winter break - I'll probably be editing this entire story, so be sure to keep checking back! Thank you for your review!! :) Report Review
So , i only just read your story and it is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
Please update it soon please
I so wanna know what's happened to scorp :DAuthor's Response: Ohhh, I'd totally forgotten about this story!!
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! I hope to update this soon, and reviews like yours will definitely help! Thanks so much again! Report Review
Hi there again! No, I haven't joined yet. It's a very busy and stressful time of my own life so it hasn't been top of the list, but I will ... meanwhile ... I know there are others who'd absolutely love to see more of this story! Don't worry so much about being blocked, I've had that, too. Just write what you feel is happening to them. This is one of my faves, I've had zillions of scenarios for how this one can work out ... do it! I'd love to see it.Author's Response: I've been waiting so long for a review. :) I have started a chapter, I'm hoping I will have time to resume and finish it very soon. :) Thanks for the encouragement and support! And JOIN already! :D Report Review
Hello again after so long ... it's the holidays so I thought ... oh well, we all have lives, mine has been super-busy, too. Any chance of an update soon? I'm eagerly awaiting what happens here! You haven't given up here, have you? Please, write more!Author's Response: Nooo I haven't given up! I tried to start the next chapter but I got blocked. I'll do my best to update soon, I promise!
P.S. I can never click on your name! You need to get an account! :) Report Review
Oh... I'm two months late finding this chapter. The universe really loves me because three of my most favorite stories have all shown up with new chapters within the last couple days of me checking... As usual, I think your characterizations of the characters is brilliant. It seems almost like Rose is a less-bosy and less-serious version of Hermione, as Scorpius is a more-sensitive and more-likable version of Draco. I can't wait for the next installment and just overall to see where this story goes. I'll be faithful 'till the end (I'll get pitchforks if I have to!)
~JazziAuthor's Response: Ohhh it's been so long since I've gotten a review and I just happened to check this today! Thank you! I will definitely begin work on another chapter with this review as my inspiration. :) Report Review
Hi there magicinthemoonlight29. I'm here to encourage you, gently push you ... happily bewitch you with all the determination of Rose trying to get to Scorpius ... to update much, much quicker next time!
Love it so far! I kind of thought Hermione would be a little more supportive of Rose, but you do have it at the beginning as if all her family turns their backs on her so I guess that's one of the things they have to overcome.
Keep with the war correspondence from Scorpius. He can't be dead ... he CAN'T be dead ... no he can't... That's the only way we can know what's going on at his end unless you want to switch POV sometimes but you have it as Rose's so ... oh just update real soon. This is getting even better!Author's Response: Hahaha hey thanks! :) They say absence makes the heart grow fonder. Or at least, that's my excuse for the long wait. ;) I will do my best for the next chapter to be up very soon! :) Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
OH MY GOD! He cant be dead. That would be a totally sucky end to the story. Please update soon! -Kirsty xxxAuthor's Response: Just keep reading. :) I will try my best to update very, very soon! :D Report Review
Hi, just checking in on "Tainted." Maybe a little gentle encouragement to update soon. We're well into summer ... look forward to seeing what happens .. :-)Author's Response: Ohhh I'm so sorry! >.< I actually started a chapter... I'll go see if I can finish it. :) I have all kinds of summer assignments and junk to do for the school year. :( But I'll do my best, thanks so much for checking in! :) Report Review
Actually ... I was wondering again when we'll see more of this lovely story ... The school year is over now. Oh I know everyone has a real life, too, as I do but I guess I'm missing this one! Would love to see what happens next! 10/10!Author's Response: Well unfortunately for me I still have a week left (and they're throwing EVERYTHING they can at me). Ughhh. But it's almost summer vacation and I will definitely be adding more to this story so don't you fret! Thanks for checking in. :) Report Review
this was just absolutely beautiful!Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! :) Report Review
I actually cried when I read this chap, it was so good. That's what a good story does -- makes one feel along with the characters. I adored Scorpius here, too. I love how you've made him a complex character but with a softer side with Rose that's just irresistible. And with a love that pure, how is Rose "tainted"? Or is this like something that starts out tainted and turns pure. Now, looking forward to those "grittier" parts you promised.Author's Response: Ohh I'm sure you won't be disappointed! Thanks so much I'm so glad you can feel what the characters are feeling. It's great to know it had the power to make you cry. :) Next chapter will be up soon! Report Review
omg, I love you, you know that? I am really into this story, my ONLY next-gen fic, aside from the two-- three?-- one-shots I've read-- did you see Minutes to Midnight? LOVED it---
But that's not the point of this review, lolz. I don't think that I would have ever expected Scorpius to be so bloody romantic! He just has this remarkably soft side that only comes out around Rose-- at least, that's what I'm getting out of it. And now that the lovely, mushy, fluff parts are done, I'm waiting to see how this has "tainted" Rose, the grittiness. I sooo can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad. :) I love Scorpius in this story. I just want to jump in and be Rose sometimes! :P
Thanks for a lovely review! Next chapter will be up as soon as possible. :) Report Review
Interesting. Very interesting. You have me hooked.Author's Response: Yay. :) That's great to hear! Thanks! :) Report Review
what happened to her last summerAuthor's Response: Oh that is just referring to the battle against the mirror in Chapter 1. She hated her appearance so much that she refused to look in a mirror, and now that she's risen above that she doesn't want to get hurt again. Make sense? :) Thanks for reading! Report Review
aw!! That is so cute! He loves her so much! Please please PLEASE update more soon! - Kirsty xxAuthor's Response: Hahahaha glad you liked it. :) I'll try my best. :) Report Review
Hi ... uh, are you planning to update this at any time soon? It's been a very long time and we're waiting, waiting ... So, would you welcome some ideas? (If not, that's ok, too :-)
Physically Scorpius is fine but he's at the front lines in the Army ... he does meet a couple of good mates, though, guys unlike the goons he knew in Slytherin so he learns real friendship. He already has true love with Rose. And maybe he reports to an Auror who hates him but maybe his overseer gives him good reports ...
Of course with the Rose POV you have to figure out how to get his story in while he's away ... Rose keeps his owl, they write back and forth ... almost everyone's against her but maybe a couple of people come back ... She decides to study healing to find a way to heal Professor Almadora and maybe she gets some ideas ...
When Scorpius returns, Rose has kept his trunk and owl because his parents didn't come but maybe eventually his mother does ... they're thrilled he's back but challenges ensue too. Being back at Hogwarts is hard because the students hate him but maybe a couple of teachers are understanding, etc. Then they need to graduate. Ok, I know it's not mine but maybe to encourage you a bit ... :-)Author's Response: I never have time to write during the school year I'm so sorry! But I'm on spring break and I just came to write a new chapter and found this lovely review. :) I already know exactly what is going to happen but thank you your ideas are wonderful. :D
Be on the lookout for a nice long new chapter! :) Report Review
Happy New Year!
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I still think that they fell too deep too soon, but it works so dearly with your plot... which I'm still wondering about. It's developing beautifully though. I really want to see the Rose without Scorpius, to be honest. And I will be so devastated if you kill him off, which I no doubtedly would do had it been me writing (uncanny habbit).
The last bit was a tad confusing though. Did you forget to use quote marks, or was it supposed to be like that? I'm not sure... well the last two paragraphs, but the other part... they also seem a bit sporadic and don't seem to have much connection to one another, if you know what I mean. But they're just so beautiful that it would be a shame if you cut them... I'm at a loss. I don't have a suggestion for what to do, really. I think you should go over and edit that part a bit, maybe? Still, LOVES IT!
Jazzi*Author's Response: Oh thank you! It was sort of what she was thinking but I didn't think it needed to be in italics it just seemed to flow fine but I'll take a peek thanks for the suggestion!
And thanks for your review Happy New Year to you as well. :) Report Review
Oh I'm SO happy you updated!
I was really ad at how long it took so this is marvelous!
I really loved this chapter :D it was so sad and wonderful.Author's Response: Ohhh thank you I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'm terribly sorry for the wait you know how life gets! :) Report Review
i read all the chapters and i just have to say i am completely hooked! i absolutely love this! its horrible what Scorpius has to go through thoughAuthor's Response: Ah yes I agree Scorpius will have some tough trials to face! I'm very glad you enjoyed my story thanks for your review. :) Report Review
i liked it a lot. and i like where i think you're going with the storyline and plot (maybe) :) great jobAuthor's Response: Oh thank you so much! :) Report Review
Ooh I really like this! It's different from the other stories that I've been reaidng on here, which is a good thing! Please, don't let him die. I'll be sad :(.Author's Response: Hahahahaha aw thanks I'm glad you liked it! But you'll just have to wait and see sorry. :) Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Wow, that was not what i was expecting at all! Good twist in the tale! What will Rose do now that Scorpius is going away? Who will she hang out with for 6 months since everyone hates her?! Awesome story! xxAuthor's Response: Sooo many questions! Ha. I'm thrilled you're enjoying it thanks for the review! :D Report Review
I liked it so far, it's really good. It seems unrealistic, but still good ^^Author's Response: Wel it is fanfiction so I can do whatever I want in my own weird little world. :3 Ha I'm glad you liked it though! Report Review
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