This chapter is good too. One thing the Avada Kadavra curse is a killing curse. It should have killed her. It is unfightable. Report Review
This chapter is good. It has alittle bit of a descriptive problem in the beginning though, Other than that is awsome! Report Review
Its good. The beginning needs to be a bit more descriptibve though! It seems to just jump to another thing without explaing the first part! Report Review
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
its so good Report Review
this is so cool!!! I totally love evanesce!!!! cool and can i be a exchange student too i want to be late at least pleas!!!?!!!?!?!!! well if you can add me i wanna be in gryffindor name Inaru Rios quidditch player(chaser/keeper) i want to be an ilegal animagus(white tiger withe beautiful blue eyes) i wanna have telekinessis and telepatic powers i want to be the typical funny/romantic girl pleasse not bitchy and i want to have dirty blonde hair , 5\'5/5\'4 , honeygold eyes a different hair style everyday and well i live it here b/c you are the author so you decide please please please let me be on this one and please e-mail me if I can PLEASE!!!!
WRITE MORE I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!! Report Review
Cool, though it seemed kind of fast. Have yuou read Never Before? I have chapter 6 up. Please update. Report Review
HI VERY CUTE!! DO YOU THINK YOU COULD HOOK ME UP WITH SOMEONE AS LIKE DRACO....OR SOMETHING!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! PLEASE WRITE MORE?! Report Review
oh, thanks erica, i can\'t wait for the next chapter, i want to get into trouble,
delilia Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE SOON?! Report Review
please carry on, my moms name was charlie revina, she was that girl behind sirius in the pensieve,my parents were going to get married but called it off to protect the potters, they were at the alter as well, but they are still legally engaged but since my dad is dead...............
delilah black. Report Review
forgot to metion, i\'m a BRILLAINT singer,
i changed my name again,back 2 Padfoot,
delilah black Report Review
Very cool!!! I love it please write more! Report Review
my e-mail things gone haywire so i\'ll have to review it,
Name: Delilah Black(sirius black\'s daughter)
Looks:pretty,black hair to shoulders,
Personality:prankster, quick with comebacks, loves snowball fights,good fighter,NEVER shy
personal info: black belt in karate.
I\'d be interested. Would it be all right just leaving a reply, instead of sending an email? Report Review
HI!! GOOD LUCK WITH THIS..
Look\'s: Long black with red hair indigo blue eye\'s. 5\'5\", Curvey, Puerto rican and Native american. I am Rocker. I wear the studded jewlery, the dark makeup the panys and ect..
Personality:I can be the female volomort. But I can be nice when I want to be. I love to play pranks and I get into fights alot. I am a spitfire. I listen to Manson, System of a down, Korn, Black sabbith, and Gun\'s and Roses. Report Review
ugh id like to be in it
name: ginnymalfoy (jessica)
hobbies: read write draw
looks: tall dirty blonde hair just below the sholders blue eyes with a little bit of green
some times shy other times not Report Review
was i supposed to mention im 5\'6 i do like to play pranks on people i dont get into physical fights but i do get into verbal fightsi listen to rock music and pop
i dont know if i was supposed to say that Report Review
I guess I\'ll go ahead, then...
Name:Johanna Henrickson, but everyone calls her Joei - and it\'s spelled like that, too, with an \'i\', not a \'y\'.
Looks:Relatively long strawberry blond hair, chocolate brown eyes, avergae height. She wears Muggle clothes under her robes, finding them more comfertable, and always wears a blue, hand-knitted beanie.
Personality:Rebel, sarcastic, and cynical, but you can\'t help but love her. She reads a lot - usually dark stuff - and is rather bright, which is the only reason she was put into Raveclaw. She isn\'t studious at all, in fact she blows off her homework more often than not. She can\'t spell worth beans, and she doesn\'t care about proper gammer at all. still, she\'s brillient with charms, and in fact has a *shifty eyes* enchanted water bike. It flys - she hides it in the Forbidden Forest. She can handle herself well, and fights snide remarks with over enthusiastic declarations of her love for those insulting her - perferably in a public place.
Likes/Dislikes:Loves to read, draw, break rules, walk through the grounds during the evening, and goof off. She hates any sort of vegtable except potatoes, which she loves, and she would perfer a hamburger over any other food. She can\'t handle emotional situations, and isn\'t very good at cheering people up when they are crying. Infact, she kind of panics when she sees tears and trys to crack jokes to ease the tension.
Friends?:She makes friends pretty easily, but she can made enemies just as easily. Doesn\'t really like Ravenclaws as much becuase they spend to much time studying.
One such thing to piss her off:Steal her het. She\'ll curse you into oblivion. Another thing, btw, she rocks at dueling. Next to no one can beat her.
steal her hat, I meant Report Review
I\'d love to be in it if I could...
Name: Madelyn Becker
House: SLytherin or Gryffindor...Slytherin is my top choice
Looks: Medium length dark brown curly hair, rather skinny but not too skinny, blue eyes, slighly upturned nose, 5\'4, and if there is anything else feel free to add
Personality: Tom boyish, tries to act tough, though most people dont think she is, cause she is kinda small. Likes bandanas and baseball hats, she doesnt really warm up to people right away.
Anything else you want to add feel free to do so...if you do need more info just email me, thanks
~Snakegurl~ Report Review
If it\'s sixth year Joei\'ll be sixteen, okay? Report Review
i\'ll be in it Report Review
i don\'t know gryfinndor or ravenclaw
Quidditch team : Chaser
hazel eyes brown hair 5,4
Im easy to hang around with ,caring ,kind,brave,confident,have a love to have fun
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