Reading Reviews for The Firstborn
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Review #1, by avidfan68 The Firstborn

7th December 2009:
Really good story. True to the characters. I liked the addition of Frederick to James' name.

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Review #2, by quickquackduck4 The Firstborn

9th October 2008:
This story was super cute, sweet and fluffy and funny. I liked it a lot.
The only part I didn't really understand was the purple dots all over Harry though. You didn't clarify that very good.
Keep up the fluffy one-shots!
Update with another soon and VERY GOOD WORK!

ps come check out and review my story, March On. Thanks!

LOVE, qqd4

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