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Review #1, by mikel There for Me

30th October 2009:
Thatz sweet! U shuld totally have another story of them mabye a sequel!

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Review #2, by Daphne 13 There for Me

25th April 2009:
INteresting!!! Love it!! You should really update soon, make this a novel or novella!! ;)

Author's Response: thank you so much

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Review #3, by jock wizard There for Me

12th January 2009:
luna story good good

Author's Response: thank you

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Review #4, by Pookha There for Me

25th October 2008:
It's a really nice story and a believable if non-canon situation. You present Ginny pretty well and Harry being holed up fits his character very well.

I loved 'the Glare'

There are a number of typos in the story that distract from it, which is too bad because it's a nice, light story with my fave ship in it.

"I told you that your stubborn." should be "I told you that you're stubborn."

"My names Luna Lovegood" should be "My name's Luna Lovegood"

I also must say that there's no way that Quidditch gives you nice abs-it's not a particularly physical sport and they don't 'work out' like Muggle sports-you can see the different body types listed playing Quidditch in the books and see this is so.

Other than the few small quibbles I have, I enjoyed the plot and characterizations and those are the most important parts of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate it.

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Review #5, by petites sorcieres There for Me

5th October 2008:
that was fantastic! I really love it ^^ beautiful baaner too!

Author's Response: thank you so much :) rosai made the banner for me

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