This story is so funny! I don't know why, but I just burst out laughing when I was reading the random part about the peas haha. Great job! I think Leslie is a marvelous OC, and I'm anticipating more Oliver-Leslie action in the future (yes yes?!). Awesome job!
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Lol, so I'm not supposed to like Leslie then? =P Well, she's still a good character. I like her outburst there; I can just picture the look on Snape's face when she did that. I love how you wrote Flitwick, so understanding. Can't wait to see more Oliver/Leslie though. ;) Great job, Ali! *huggles*Author's Response: Well, I don't much like Leslie. She annoys me. XD But I'm glad you think she's a good character - I spent a while making her. And originally the person who I put in Snape's place was McGonagall! Random trivia, but hey. XD
And Flitwick is my secret lover. o_O Honestly. I LOVE him.
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Lol, I love it! I always love Oliver/OC and fluff, so this was the perfect combination. ^_^ Leslie made me laugh, and I like Ginna as well. I could just imagine their shock when they saw each other on the platform. =D I'm really looking forward to how the plot is going to be.Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, Priss!
Yeah, Oliver/OC can't go without a bit of fluff, because fluff is FUN!
xD I'm not sure you should like Leslie - I took the things I dislike most about my friends and put them into her. P:
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wow, this is turning out to be really cool :)Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it ^_^ Report Review
Oh my! this is so interesting :) i love it!Author's Response: -squishes-
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Yay! More Ravenclaw Quidditch stories! There's something funny about hearing Oliver yell, "Far out!" xDAuthor's Response: YAY FOR QUIDDITCH! :)
And yes, according to my beta Oliver shouldn't swear, so I replaced it with that xD
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