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Review #1, by confusedlover Despite Our Differences

14th August 2009:
very lovely.

i thought that you did a wonderful job on this little one-shot. you really seemed to have a nice grasp on your characters and i believe that that was one of the things that made this work out so well. you mentioned that you have never written Pansy before but honestly, i think that you did more than alright. so many writers who aren't focusing on her directly portray her as a doppy, love-struck girl but you really appeared to bring some life to her character and i found that truly exciting. i am certainly impressed that you pulled her off so well when you have never had experience with her character.

was this seriously your first time writing in first-person? well, being truthful, i couldn't tell at all. you didn't seem to have any problem at all with it and i would definitely advise you to write it again in the future. you seemed to know what you were doing and therefore i believe that it worked out well for you.

overall, i thought that this was a lovely take on Pansy. it was realistic in nearly every way possible and i am convinced that you knew exactly where you were going with this when you first started it. great job. feel free to come back to my thread anytime that you wish; i honestly do love your style and your stories. keep up the beautiful work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

This made me smile.

After this piece, I wrote another one-shot involving Pansy, but I'm so glad that you liked this since I never editted it after it was first posted. :D

She's a hard character to write, because she's so easy to get wrong. I'm glad you thought I did well.

Thanks so much for all of your compliments, I'll be back at the thread soon. :]


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Review #2, by long_live_luna_bellatrix Despite Our Differences

14th December 2008:
Wow, that was amazing!

Usually I'm not a Pansy fan, or a fan of any story where the Slytherins are main characters, actually. I feel like the author makes them all sweet and nice when they're really cold and mean. And you did that. But some how you made it a little more believeable. Maybe it was Pansy's crush, and it made her more human. But you did a nice job. I really liked it.

The snowball fight is a genius idea! It was so much fun. My only suggestion for that part would be to have Draco be a little more competitive towards the Gryffindors; we can't forget that huge rivalry.

Otherwise, very nice job. It was a good, well written story and even though it was long I flew right throught it. Nice work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to review this, since I know it is a bit long for a one-shot. :D

I'm really glad that you liked the snowball fight, that was probably my favorite part to write.

I agree about Draco's competitiveness, I really should have caught onto that before now... haha.

Well, anyway, thank you so much for reviewing, I'm really glad you liked this since it was such a different angle for me.


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Review #3, by littlealice Despite Our Differences

29th November 2008:
i love it. ten out of ten.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, thanks for taking the time to review. :D --DracoFerret11

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