Great job! I loved it Report Review
That was a great chapter. Please continue Report Review
First off great job! Love the story idea. Keep up the good story Report Review
This chapter was really good! I remember reading it the first time around, and I liked it then too, but it's definitely been improved. I thought the idea of painting your nails when you're stressed was really good and inventive, it was a nice way for people to know something was up with Fiona. I really hope the next Chapter is up soon! 10/10!
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Hi! I added this story to my faves AGES ago, and I'm glad it's back alive! I really like what we see of all the characters in this chapter, and I can't wait to get to know them all better.
-InsertWittyCommentHereAuthor's Response: Aw, that made me smile! I really wasn't happy with it all the first time 'round, but I'm really excited with where everythings going now. Hope you like it.
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I love ur Story!!! it's really nice! plz update! i want 2 see wot happens next!!i'm guessing the kid isn't sirius??Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see soon enough... :) Report Review
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