Reading Reviews for Detention For Seven
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Review #1, by rozen_maiden Every Night Is A Different Story

2nd December 2010:
I really like this story idea and concept, I believe it has really good potential. I'm sucked in by your plotline, it reminds me a lot of the breakfast club - and I love that movie! You write very beautifully, but at times I feel that your story hits rocks. Paragraphs flow nicely but then you seem to loose your momentum. Its as if you just get sick of writing the paragraph and move onto the next without letting it melt onto the next paragraph - if that makes sense.
Other than that, there's just the fact that Blaise (mysteriously due to his mother) doesn't have a father. But it really doesn't matter, its called artistic creativity ;)
I loved this story. Its such a wonderful idea. I kno you haven't updated in a while but I would love to read on..
Thanks so much for this read!
Xx Mahalia

Author's Response: Hi!
Yes, there was definitely a "Breakfast Club" inspiration for this story. That is one of my personal favourites to watch on a Sunday afternoon. I remember being so excited writing this chapter. Thanks for reading!


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Review #2, by White_Roses Every Night Is A Different Story

18th October 2008:
oohh intriguing :D
what was in the letter?
"Welcome to Detention" haha it makes it sound like hell
I actually like Blaise in this one, even if he is friends with Malfoy. And i wish that Harry wouldn't be so... i don't know ... easy to get all riled up? he's like that in so many fics but i don't think he is really in the HP books!? ...well that thing with Umbridge doesn't count... Please don't make him all excitable and self-rightous, it's what so many people do.
Hope you update soon!!

Author's Response: Hello!

Thanks for dropping by and leaving a review. I haven't written anything for this story in such a long time but I will definitely be returning to it once some of my other fics get done.

The contents of that letter will be revealed in time. I originally planned for this fic to run about 5 or six chapters so you will find out eventually ;)

As for Harry, I know, I also hate it when people right Harry as if he is about to pick a fight with someone every minute of the day. The only reason I made him have an outburst now was because he was already extremely irritated with Hermione and Ron, and now he is in detention so something was bound to set him off... that something just happened to be Malfoy :)

Thanks for the review!


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Review #3, by Tom_DracosGirl Every Night Is A Different Story

9th October 2008:
A nice mixture of people to end up stuck together. I'm sure this will be very interesting to read and I'm going to add this to my fave's so I won't miss any updates.

Everything seemed to flow at a nice pace and everyone seemed in character, even though we don't know much about Blaise nothing about him seemed forced or uncomfortable. I've never read anything that includes Blaise' father before so I'm lookign forward to discovering more on that angle.

An enjoyable first chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hello again!

Aw, I'm so happy to hear that I've got you interested!

I'm glad to hear that you thought the pace and characterization was in-check. Blaise was so much fun to write because he is very mysterious and unknown to readers.

I hope you keep up with the story :D


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Review #4, by Eridanus Every Night Is A Different Story

8th October 2008:
You've definitely chosen an interesting bunch of people to stick in a room together, no doubt sparks are going to fly.
I mostly like your characterisation.I thought that Blaise talking to an owl was very amusing, Lavender is being as irritating as ever and of course it was Ron that sent the suit of armour flying.
I was just wondering though will there be any pairings? Or are they just undisclosed as yet?
Good job, 7/10

Author's Response: Hey!

Well thanks for stopping by to review!

It took me a while to decide who was going to be stuck in detention together so I'm glad you think that they are an interesting group. And you are right, sparks will definitely go flying.

Also, I'm so glad you liked my characterization. That is something that I always try to get right so it's nice to hear that you thought it was good.

Thanks again!

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Review #5, by Pink_Flamingo Every Night Is A Different Story

6th October 2008:
This seems like it'll be a pretty interesting story.
I don't usually read stories that are in the trio's era, but this looks to be good.
I think you've written all of the characters very well.
I'm also excited to see what waits for them in detention. :)

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm so glad I intrigued your interest! I haven;t updated in such a long time but I will definitely be posting soon so you will be able to find out what happens in detention soon enough.

Thanks for the review!

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