I like it! Is there going to be more? You really should add more.
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8/10

Author's Response: Thank you. I dont know, I wasnt planning on adding more but I might later. Currently I'm way in over my head with all the D/G exchanges and stuff Ive signed up for over at livejournal. You should check it out if you have time!

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I love this song as well=] It wasn't too bad especially for your first songfic. I was a little confused at first, i thought the two versions were connected, maybe you could switch it to story one and story two. Just an opinion though. The writing could be improved, but that comes with time. Maybe a little more explaining in the story not afterwords. And a you could also add some thought of theirs, like what was Ginny feeling as Draco left her or what Draco was feeling when Ginny left him. I loved the banner and loved the song pick! Keep up the writing!=]

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I think it's really good - like the way theres two versions

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i've never heard of the song. You should start writing more than one chapter storys. it was good but i don't think malfoy would cry like that. but then again, ginny and malfoy would never get together and we beleivein that and write about that.

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i liked it i was anxious to see what was going to happen..

Author's Response: oh thank you it didnt come out as awesome as it seemed in my mind so i was kinda worried but thanks!

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