Reading Reviews for A History of Becoming a Lover
14 Reviews Found

Review #1, by helenpotter94 Christmas

6th November 2010:
wow that as intense.
you have a unique writing style but sometimes i think you get carried away and skip words haha its just a bit confusing :) but other than that excellent!
i like its refreshing originality.

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Review #2, by hi Christmas

3rd February 2009:
wow. . . that. was. AMAZING! ok seriously like i am speechless right now, wow is all i can say! HOLY FREAKIN SHIT!

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Review #3, by pensiveprincess Christmas

3rd February 2009:
hey! mmmkay so, personally i think you did a really good job with this chapter, because it wasn't like overly graphic... if that makes any sense... mmmkay ACKWARD! moving along, i really liked the bolded quote thingie at the bottom, is that a real quote or is it something you came up with on your own? because it was really really cool...

THANKS for updating! can't wait for the next chapter!

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Review #4, by H_mykeeper_P Telling

21st January 2009:
I am really getting into this story. It is a little difficult to understand sometings, but as a whole the idea is great. Continue please...

Author's Response: thanks!
well im glad you like it
and ill try to edit before i paste

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Review #5, by AmberEyes Telling

20th January 2009:
this is a good story but it has a lot of spelling errors and typos.

Author's Response: Thankx!
Yeah i have a problem with that, i get an idea and i dont have the patience to fix it because i want to write the next chapter...
well if you know a beta! lol

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Review #6, by pensiveprincess Telling

19th January 2009:
aww! that was AMAZING!!! :) you are such an awsome writer! loved the whole chapter. lah finally told them!!! :)

brilliantly done and update soon!

Author's Response: Thankx Again!
Wow you are such a committed reviewer!

Oh and i will update supa quick

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Review #7, by setflyer10005 Pranking Princes of Hogwarts

15th January 2009:
You are doing good, some of the chapters are a little confusing.
I find it hard to see Mr. black with anyone but myself, too. However, I'm actually slowly letting him go to the Lah character. : )

Author's Response: Thankx a bunch!
i find myself in the same predicament

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Review #8, by pensiveprincess The faded and the scarred

11th January 2009:
very nice chapter, you wrote it very well! i loved it! updatew soon please! :)

Author's Response: already half way done with the next chapter!
and thank you!

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Review #9, by Snivellously Halloween Adventure

4th December 2008:
though its moving a little fast

Author's Response: Thanks! Will Update Soon!

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Review #10, by ihavealife iswear Pranking Princes of Hogwarts

18th November 2008:

this is an amazing story.. like WOAH!!!

ohh who was the boy i must know..

Lah in the coolest chick ever!! and sirius is soo cute..

this is such a good story.. you must continue it!!! what i mean is update very soon.. :P

k thankers...

Author's Response: awww thanks!
Yes stay tuned all willl be revealed in time!

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Review #11, by littlegirl Introduction: You see Iím not that great of a person, and I donít deny it.

12th October 2008:
kim sure this story is amazing but i love ur other story can u please continue it

Author's Response: Aww... well ill try to get a balance

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Review #12, by Hp_Desease433 My Olive Branch

8th October 2008:
Yup i like that you update quick and the chapter images!
Totally more Bonding between Lah and Lily though!

Author's Response: Yeah im jumping into year quick because i have lot to tell in little time!

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Review #13, by RealPotter333 Pranking Princes of Hogwarts

8th October 2008:
I like it!
Write more!
More Gal and Sirius Ship!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I intend to make more of that soon!

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Review #14, by Iseult Introduction: You see Iím not that great of a person, and I donít deny it.

6th October 2008:
Wow this is pretty interesting.
At first it was confusing, but then it get better. I like it. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Sorry about the beginning but im glad your sticking with it!
Things in my head sometimes sound different then they do on paper!

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