Reading Reviews for Invisibility Without the Cloak
27 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ssr Ironic much?

10th June 2010:

Update please !

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Review #2, by Karin You've got to be kidding me?

12th October 2009:
I love interventions for some reason. The whole intervention thing always make me crack up. x3

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Review #3, by Karin Chocolate Muffins Heal Everything....Well Almost Everything

12th October 2009:
OMG, NOES! What will happen? (damdamdamdam!)
Love it. :D

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Review #4, by Karin What?!? It was all the Wakspurt's fault!! I swear....

12th October 2009:
Oh, I love it. xD
poor Nikki, but it all totally makes me laugh. Great job! :D

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Review #5, by 65ashben Ironic much?

20th April 2009:
So what is going to happen? The chapters were awesome. I can't wait for more!!!

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Review #6, by Snagglepuss Ironic much?

19th April 2009:
Update soon?
i really love this chapter and all the others aswell!
Poor Nikki, i hope something good comes out of the spell haha

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Review #7, by XXcontagousXX Prologue- Alone

16th April 2009:
this is art. ART I TELL YOU!
love always ME

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Review #8, by Heart Broken Angel Ironic much?

10th April 2009:
Wow, this stories awesome! I just started reading it today and I've already read all 6 chapters in less than 20 minutes, its great!! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Review #9, by shabby Ironic much?

21st March 2009:
Omgosh, so I'm in LOVE with your fic.
Hurry up and update lol.

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Review #10, by sehntuheekuhweehn Chocolate Muffins Heal Everything....Well Almost Everything

21st March 2009:

haha i love this trick >:]

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Review #11, by Iris Howl Prologue- Alone

20th March 2009:
Well, I think it's a good idea. A girl who feels invisible and loves the most visible guy in the world. It's been done, but, that's not too big a deal.

The big deals-to me, at least-are 1)the excessive use of sighs. There are other noises a person can make. Especially Sirius. Maybe a groan, grunt, or moan of frustration?

2)The improper use of "their". I think you meant "they're" for most of them. They're = they are and their = possessive.

3)the repetition of how horribly she does in Transfiguration. I think that a mention of the consequences of this do not need the backing up of her thoughts on the matter. I mean, if she says in the first place that she's awful, do we really need to hear it a dozen more times?

Those are the biggest issues I had with the chapter as a whole. I like it, and I am probably going to keep reading. I think you have a lot of potential.

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Review #12, by MallieJJ Ironic much?

20th March 2009:
Oh my gosh! I feel so bad for Nikki! I mean that would be so humiliating if thats how you spell humiliating.

Its great though keep it up!!

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Review #13, by hplover123 Ironic much?

20th March 2009:
ohh my God! you have to carry on! i absoloutly adore this story! it's too cute x

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Review #14, by B. Martin You've got to be kidding me?

22nd February 2009:
Must say, curious as to what happens next! Particularly regarding Sirius

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Review #15, by jadziastar You've got to be kidding me?

5th February 2009:
Your forgiven, I geuss, just updait soon PLEASE!
This story is awsome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Review #16, by xosiriusblackloveox You've got to be kidding me?

27th January 2009:
Hahahah I Love This Storyy!
Its Soo Good(:
Update Soon?


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Review #17, by perfect_lily You've got to be kidding me?

22nd January 2009:
Oooh! Your killing me here! With a cliffy, how sad and not the least bit heroic! Sort of cheesy, but please update!

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Review #18, by jenn You've got to be kidding me?

21st January 2009:
oh man this is gonna be good! lol it'll be funny to see just how long they can take it and how they are going to explain it to anybody til they do. lol

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Review #19, by AmberEyes You've got to be kidding me?

20th January 2009:
I really like this so far...keep writing!

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Review #20, by blushingsu You've got to be kidding me?

20th January 2009:
your forgiven, if you update.
like seriously.
right now.
i love it though!!

Author's Response: Next chapter is almost finished. I promise. Glad you like it! :)

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Review #21, by blushingsu What?!? It was all the Wakspurt's fault!! I swear....

20th January 2009:
that was to0 funny i lovedd it!

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Review #22, by Anita What?!? It was all the Wakspurt's fault!! I swear....

22nd December 2008:
What? No more chapters? What in the heck happens next. You can't just leave us hanging like this. Write more chapters.

Author's Response: Lol...

It's coming... But these things take time. I have the next chapter almost completely written. It just needs a little more work. :)

Celtic Princess


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Review #23, by Anita Sheets, Secrets, My Thoughts and Me

22nd December 2008:
Getting interesting. I am starting to wonder if he will notice her.

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Review #24, by Anita Prologue- Alone

22nd December 2008:
I like it. Keep writing more chapters

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Review #25, by Bad_KittyWMS Chocolate Muffins Heal Everything....Well Almost Everything

16th December 2008:
hurry up with the next chapter!!! ur killing me!

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