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Review #1, by hazeltonks123098 But I Love You

24th January 2010:
XD It's really cute! I'm deffinitely favouriting! I think the two of them are perfect for the song. Ron can really be a prat sometimes (=

Author's Response: That's what I was trying to bring out here so I'm glad it worked. :)

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Review #2, by MollyOly But I Love You

22nd December 2009:
Awww! I love a good "When Hermione kissed Ron" story. Some of the passages were just a bit forced/awkward, but I especially appreciated the "Honestly Ronald/What was that/You're a..." parallel structure in each of the scenes. Very enjoyable!

Author's Response: I tried to organize it so I'm glad that worked out. I know it's a bit jumpy but I wrote it quickly for the challenge deadline. Hopefully I'll edit this someday.

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