XD It's really cute! I'm deffinitely favouriting! I think the two of them are perfect for the song. Ron can really be a prat sometimes (=Author's Response: That's what I was trying to bring out here so I'm glad it worked. :) Report Review
Awww! I love a good "When Hermione kissed Ron" story. Some of the passages were just a bit forced/awkward, but I especially appreciated the "Honestly Ronald/What was that/You're a..." parallel structure in each of the scenes. Very enjoyable!Author's Response: I tried to organize it so I'm glad that worked out. I know it's a bit jumpy but I wrote it quickly for the challenge deadline. Hopefully I'll edit this someday. Report Review
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