{reviewid: 2572050, reviewer: 'ashleym15'}
16th August 2011:
awwh that was cute and i really liked James' part, even though it was written a bit girly-ish if that makes sense:)
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{reviewid: 2527861, reviewer: 'MissThomas'}
30th May 2011:
I love the splitting of the story into the two different pov. Please tell me you will be doing this the whole story?
Its different and gives it an edge.
Not to mention it gives us an insight into both minds, unlike other storys.
I love James already!
Please update soon!
xo
Author's Response: haha i'm so glad you like, especially cause i had a little bit of difficulty writing james. i am definitely going to continue with the style, so no worries there. :)
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{reviewid: 2527858, reviewer: 'MissThomas'}
30th May 2011:
I love this!
It's different from other stories.
They sorta-kinda-deny that they like eachother already.
It's funny and witty and written in a different style.
Gah, I love it!
10/10
xo
Author's Response: awww thanks for such a lovely review! :) i'm glad you find it so different, hopefully i can keep that up haha.
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{reviewid: 2491645, reviewer: 'Ivon'}
9th March 2011:
I really like the story and the character Lucille is really great I want to see how the story plays out please continue it.
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{reviewid: 2242133, reviewer: 'Twilight_Princess'}
23rd October 2009:
LOL I like the introductions. I do hope you can update soon!
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{reviewid: 2073757, reviewer: 'snowfallingonroses'}
12th March 2009:
Very cute story! I enjoyed reading it! =) I can't wait for future chapters!
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{reviewid: 2053366, reviewer: 'Sharvi'}
11th February 2009:
Nice really nice i hope that you update soon!
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{reviewid: 2052692, reviewer: 'amanda'}
10th February 2009:
wow i LOVE this story! KEEP WRITING!!! =)
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{reviewid: 2052618, reviewer: 'Christy86'}
9th February 2009:
update soon can't wait for more chapters
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{reviewid: 2052563, reviewer: 'AmberEyes'}
9th February 2009:
This is great! keep writing!
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{reviewid: 2052555, reviewer: 'ddog'}
9th February 2009:
heyyy i thought it wuz a pretty god start to the story ur writing.u def got me hooked to read the nxt chapters so pleas hurry up and get the next 1 out! tnx luv u!!
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{reviewid: 2052533, reviewer: 'Vanity_Fair'}
9th February 2009:
Love the similarity you have portrayed in both Lucille and James! :) I will have to keep watching, I hope you update soon, this has definite potential to turn to something really good :) I didn’t see any grammar mistakes good job!
Gem
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{reviewid: 2013547, reviewer: 'her_mi_oh_knee'}
20th December 2008:
aww, it's cute! And would be adorable in the end after being frustrating all the way through what with us knowing the feelings of both parties...however, i do think it would be fun to see how you get them there...
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{reviewid: 1999221, reviewer: 'Maybe%20a%20Marauder'}
30th November 2008:
this is cute =) I like this. Keep going, I look forward to the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 1998989, reviewer: 'clumsyfun'}
30th November 2008:
Its really cute. Keep updating.
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{reviewid: 1998764, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
30th November 2008:
Go for a joking slacker when she could have some intellectual know it all who would stimulate her intelligence or whatever?
ha.. awesome!
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{reviewid: 1998319, reviewer: 'Rachel'}
29th November 2008:
This is great so far! The voice is just so... voicy! It's a good thing, don't worry. You are also a very talented writer.
Is the next chapter going to be Rose and Scorpius?
Update soon!
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{reviewid: 1998213, reviewer: 'loonylovegood1212'}
29th November 2008:
I LOVE IT! love how each character had their time to talk about the situation...so creative.please write more.
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{reviewid: 1964562, reviewer: 'sweetest_downfall'}
15th October 2008:
I like you're story and it's verry funny!
I hope you`re going to update sonn with some more action in the next chapters.
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