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Review #1, by Ravenclaw Chica Chapter Two

19th February 2011:
Run! For the love of Merlin, Elsie, run for it!!
oh my god the suspense.

Also, I know you haven't updated in like, three years. Please please PLEASE update soon--this story is amazing and I desperately need more.

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Review #2, by xMusicGurlx  Chapter Three

22nd June 2009:
I cant wait for your update! I love the story of Persephone and Hades. Its one of my favorites and I cant wait to see how you tie it in and all. I dont know why I love this Greek couple so much; i guess Im just into the forbidden love aspect.
Well all i can add is that you need to update soon!

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Review #3, by searching17 Chapter Three

4th October 2008:
"My voice sounded like the squeak of a dying rodent in the grips of a catís hungry teeth." Oh my God. Your description is brilliant. I envy it, I really do. I can't conjure metaphors/similes like that. And if I do, it's on a particularly inspiring and lucky day. Love the feeling of unease you created even in the beginning of the story. Please continue writing. It's a great start. :]
~Estrella

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Review #4, by searching17 Chapter Two

4th October 2008:
Nice ending. The 'i thought that somehow it was the very wind itself that had spoken' part was brilliant. Loved it. I also love the portrayal of James and Lily in this chapter. It's very realistic and I just want to hug the characters to death. I have yet to see where this story is going, but I'm sure its going to be very interesting. Great job. :]
~Estrella

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Review #5, by searching17 Chapter One

4th October 2008:
Oh wow. The story's turning for a very dark edge now. Can't wait to see what happens - off to chapter three!

-Estrella

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Review #6, by searching17 Prologue

4th October 2008:
This is Estrella from the Forums! Sorry I'm late with your review. :]
First off, I have to say that I love your description. Your character is very interesting and deep. Is that Persephone? Well, Kudos to you - you really set the tone of the story, and made me want to read more. I'm off to the next chapter!
~Estrella

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Review #7, by Leent Chapter Three

4th October 2008:
Hello~ since my reviews from your request were lost, I am trying to replenish what I can...

I do remember this story very well. Your descriptions are perfection, and put the reader straight into the thoughts of the character. "It felt like staring at an artwork in a museum by an old master whose name was an echo from school textbooks." - I loved that I felt I was staring right at this person along with your character. The tension you created was compelling there. And how unfortunate that we still don't know who this person is and what he wants. Perfect movement into your next chapter...

Smiles~Leent

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