Wow, what a great story! I love that Harry goes from being ready to give up on the world, his journey, and everyone from finding hope and getting his faith back in what he was meant to do. It was so uplifting and I love the way you go into this moment from DHs and add more depth to it and to see just how Harry was feeling and why he had been turning so cranky. A beautiful readů I enjoyed this a lot!Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you think so. There was so little JKR didn't cover in that chapter, that it didn't leave me a lot of space to write what I wanted to. So that people think I did it well makes me very happy. Thanks so much! Report Review
This was a lovely little filler piece. I think you described Harry's actions/thoughts well when he was wearing the locket, as we know how the locket made them feel. The song lyrics worked so well with the piece, you worked them together with the storyline perfectly. I loved the little details you added in, like hearing Hermione's breathing in the tent, it really helped set the scene. Well done!Author's Response: Thank you so much for a lovely review. I'm glad you liked the little details. I try to use them to really set the tone of the story. Thanks for taking the time to read and review! Report Review
I have a theory, and I'm sure it's true. Positive, in fact!
You, Taryn Lastname, are actually J.K. Rowling. Yep. Yaha. It's true, and I know it! Ha! You have no more secrets! Well, you might, but I know this one!
I mean, how else could you explain it? The way this works, and fits and is so...canon! And it's just brilliant! Honestly, zomgquee brilliant!
I idolise your writing.Author's Response: Awww--thanks Ali! I don't think I'm JKR--I certainly don't have her money... but I don't have the hassle of the press and public either. I'm so glad you think this fits in well with her stories though. I don't want to be JKR, but if you think I did that well, then I'm thrilled! *huggles* :o) Report Review
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