awesome story, write more soon! Report Review
I'm glad to see everyone is getting along!! Pretty cool that Scorpius bought himself a house already haha wonder how Hermione and Ron will feel about Rose going to hang out there with him. Those two are very cute together. Report Review
I enjoyed the chapter very much. Their home, I imagine it to look like a power struggle. You know... like the bedroom is more feminine, with a Cannons poster slapped on the wall with spello tape. Their living room is all Colonial with one ratty old recliner that was Rons favorite from home. I think you get the picture,Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :) Well, you got one part of your description very similar to what I have written. Look out for Ron's chair--LOL. Thank you for the review! And please check back when I update. --Kate/RP Report Review
this story is fab! Update soon! xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :) Check back when I post part 31, please! --RP Report Review
I'm seriously in LOVE with your story and I think you are a wonderful writer. Your characters sound SO REAL, and I really get the impression that this IS a HP fan-fic, instead of just being some romance that could take place anywhere. It feels like it's a real Harry Potter book, if you know what I mean. Everyone in the real HP books acts just like they're supposed to, and, well, I really, really love your story. PLEASE write more. On a semi-related note, how long do you envision this story being? Anyway, I think Ron and Hermione's house looks like the Weasley house, small, cottagey, and homey. I never comment on people's stories, but your story is JUST SO GOOD that I had to tell you how I felt about it.Author's Response: Thank you for such high praise! :) This review has me smiling even though I'm sick! There will be several more chapters. I believe I'll probably go through the rest of their 7th year, unless I just happen to find the "right" spot to stop that does the story justice. Ron and Hermione's house will definitely be "homey!" Please check back to read and review when I post the next chapter! Thanks! --Kate Report Review
I swear...this story is absolutely amazing and not full of fluff like alot of fan fics I've read! You've developed the characters wonderfully and it seems so realistic! Also your characters who existed before (harry ron hermione draco etc) haven't swerved much from their original personalities.and I absolutely love that! It really seems like a real spin-off of the series! I can't wait for more chapters!!! ^_^ Amazing work!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am flattered that you enjoy my story so much. :) I can't wait to hear from you on future chapters! Thanks again, Kate/RP Report Review
please please put up the next chapter!! this chapter was awesome!! Cant wait for the next one :DAuthor's Response: I am so glad you liked it! I apologise for being away for so long--my last year of undergraduate studies was so busy. But I am back and I hope you'll return to read some more! Thanks! :) --RP Report Review
Holy crap. I'm ashamed. I finally come back to this site and seek this story out and discover you've released a handful of chapters...and I wasn't there to read/review them! So just to touch on a few things, I enjoyed the way you handled them "taking their relationship another step forward". Despite the mature rating on this story and having full rights to making it as smutty as anyone's darkest desires, you made it tasteful, respectful and more about their emotions than the actual deed. I'm fairly glad you didn't have Scorpius joining them at the Burrow for Christmas. At this stage of their relationship, it'd seem a bit overly-done and forced, to be quite honest. I do like how you've set up the St. Mungo's Charity Ball though. A few things should come to a head there. I am really enamored with the Lily/Eli subplot. I'm curious as to where you'd take that as well. I don't have to tell you to keep being fantastic, since you don't have a problem in doing exactly that.Author's Response: Seeing your review makes my day! :) I haven't been posting much or doing much with this story lately--mainly because it was my senior year in college--but I've come back and I am all about getting this story moving again. Yay! I'm glad that you thought that step was tasteful--I don't mind smut or detailed scenes, but I just felt that with Rose and Scorpius being young and having so many very young characters in the story, being too descriptive would just feel awkward or even forced. It was also much more about Rose feeling comfortable enough with their relationship to move forward. Yeah, I think the whole "we just started dating and I'm going to stay at your parents/grandparents' house for the entire Christmas holiday" bit is a little extreme. When I was seventeen, I didn't have friends over for more than two nights tops. So, I am totally with you on that. They will see each other during break, but there won't be sleepovers with all of the Hogwarts students in Molly and Arthur's living room. LOL. So glad you like Lily and Eli! :) Thank you so much for the review! I can't wait to hear from you again with future updates! Happy Summer! --Kate Report Review
it would be awsome if rose said yes then told scorpius shes pregnant that would be the best story everAuthor's Response: I guess you'll have to wait and see what happens... Although (spoiler) that's not exactly the direction I'm going for. Thanks for the enthusiasm! Report Review
WHY WOULD THEY HAVE 2 BEDROOMS THAT STUPID THEY SHOULD SHARE A ROOM !Author's Response: Once again, he never asked her to move in... You'll just have to wait and see what happens! Thanks! Report Review
OMG! HE WANTS HER TO MOVE IN WHAT WILL SHE SAYAuthor's Response: Careful, there--he hasn't asked her to move in, has he? Watch the drama unfold... LOL. Thanks for the review! Report Review
WHAT DOES DRALIA LOOK LIKEAuthor's Response: Dralia looks a lot like the other Malfoys. You can refer to the chapter where she is introduced for a description, or you can wait to see her again in later chapters for a newer description. :) Thanks. Report Review
UPDATE SONNN OR ILL KILL U HAHAHAHAAuthor's Response: You should watch posting things like that--it's a TOS violation. But thank you for the read! Report Review
AW POOR ROSIE SO CONFLICTED I LOVE WHEN SHE TELLS OFF ADA YES I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS I READ THIS LIKE 1000 TIMES I LOVE IT WRITE MORE THOUGHAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
What wait is he going to ask rose to move in with me? Oh and Ada zabini is a bitch! What does ada look like does she have dark skin rose says she's like a slytherin goddess she must be pretty! What Does rose look like and scorpius you need to put pictures!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm not one that's particularly big on chapter images, especially with over 30 chapters to this fic. But if you look back to the beginning of the story, you'll see some descriptions. There will be more to come when the New Years' ball happens, too. Thanks! Report Review
Great chapter! Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! I just updated (Good Lord--it really has been forever), so if you see this, please come check it out! Thanks so much! Report Review
Aww wow, that's so cute!! A house? Can't wait to see what happens next. I love those two :') please update soon! Another fab chapter xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! --Kate/RP Report Review
What could it possibly look like? Has to be a small cosey cottage with two bedrooms of course :) but thats not what I wonder about, No, I wonder how Ron will take that kind of information. There's no keeping tabs on the young couple if Scorpius has a home of his own, am I right? Nice surprise for Rose in this chapter.Author's Response: Very good guess on the house! :) And yes--much harder to keep tabs on someone who lives on their own. Thanks for the kind review, and please check back at my next update! --Kate/RP Report Review
Fantastic chapter again! Can't wait for the next update and I'm glad it's coming soon :) the two of them are soo cute! Um possibly lucius? Cuz I reckon Ron and Draco would be civil more or less hahaAuthor's Response: Lucius is a new guess--and a good one! I think all of the other readers are so focused on Ron and Draco that they hadn't taken time to consider Lucius! Very clever of you! Thank you so much for the kind review--I'm s glad you're enjoying the story! Check back soon! --Kate/RP :) Report Review
loved this chapter, rose & quidditch? i want scorpius to take her out on the pitch! they are adorable, personally i think Ron will stir up the most trouble with Draco protecting his little girl. can't wait!Author's Response: Thanks! That may just happen--we'll have to see. :) And Ron seems to be the guess most people agree with, and it's a good one. You'll just have to wait to see how it all goes down! Thanks so much, and please check back soon! --Kate/RP Report Review
hey, I just found this story and I really like it heaps :D Great work :) I reckon Ron's gonna blow next chapter XD 10/10 :)Author's Response: Maybe not next chapter, but that's a pretty good guess. We all know what a hot-head he can be at times. :) Thanks for the review, and please check back! --Kate/RP Report Review
Ron- Rose's father: I only say this because he could never keep a cool head not even when he was in school.Author's Response: Good guess! I guess we'll see how he reacts on the big night, when confronted with the Malfoy family! Thanks, Kate/RP :) Report Review
The fact that he likes rose for rose and is not trying to change her. And the fact he gets alone with all her friends and cousins.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you feel he's trying so hard in their relationship! Please check back for my next update! --Kate/RP Report Review
i've been reading all of these chapters and they're amazing... you should publish? looking forward to more and good luck :) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! What a kind compliment! *blushes* Please check back soon for the next chapter--I'd love to hear from you again! --Kate/RP :) Report Review
I honestly have no idea how I haven't read this story until now! It's flipping amazing! I just literally read all 27 chapters up straight, I loved it so much. I love all your characters and I expespecially want Al and Jeanette to hurry up and just get together! Here's hoping that the next update is a quick one, because I love this and honestly can't wait to see what happens next! You are a truly brilliant writer! ~cAuthor's Response: Wow! Thank you so much, and thanks for reading this whole thing at once! Your feedback is so kind and motivating--thanks so much! Please check back soon when I update--I'd love to hear your take Al/Jeanette some more and see what you think of the rest of the fic! Thanks, Kate/RP Report Review
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