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Review #1, by heidi_gurrl A new day

16th April 2009:
You seem to jus state the basics of each situation. . . aka; PLEASE USE MORE DESCRIPTION! Otherwise the story is more like a quick revision of each day, instead of an actual interesting magical tale, like it should be. . . . But it's not too nad otherwise. . . . I understand what kind of story you were attempting to write, you just need some more practice, that's all. . . . With Love, Heidi-Maree. xoxoxox

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Review #2, by dasnfda A new day

19th March 2009:
aw. I love it so much- cute! Update very soon


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