3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by anon27 People Are Strange

5th October 2013:
I'm going out on a limb to say the boy she met was Regulus. Why not.

Interested by the story...would love to see the next chapter and figure out what this is actually about!

ps- Huge Remus fan. Yay Remus.

Author's Response: You're correct, congrats! :) And thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're interested, one of these days, I'm going to sit down and post more of this story...
Oh and, fellow huge Remus fan here :)


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Review #2, by rachm34 Making Friends

1st January 2009:
How can you only have one review?! You deserve much more for this chapter! I see eight people have favorited your story so that's good.

I really thought the opening chapter was good. It really makes you get a whole sense of what is going on. There are some things that could use work on. I feel like you would need more descriptions between when the people are speaking. I'm not getting a very good sense of what is going on around them or anything. You could also work moreon your transitional scenes they are happening quite quickly

other than that. Very well done!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! ^^ I had a few more but they were lost in the site crash, moreover, I haven't updated in ages so I guess I shouldn't have expected better. xD
You're probably right about the description parts, I was just terrified that I'd bore people, and nothing was really screaming for description, but I'll definitely keep it in mind for the next chapters. And I agree about the transitions, suppose I'll have to work on that quite a bit. =) Anyways, thanks again for the suggestions and kind words, I really appreciate it!


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Review #3, by LynnHelven Making Friends

25th October 2008:
Dude! I loved this chapter so much, and this story in general- please plase update soon! Please, for my sanity!

Where have you gone to??

Also, I do so miss your reviews! They really made my day, and all of the ones you left before got deleted in the crash!

Come back!

Anyway, update soon, 10/10

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you did! I have no words to express how sorry I am for disappearing like that, truly I am. I'd like to think I'm back to regular writing now, though, so I guess it's safe to say that you could expect the next chappie soon of FTSTT soon :]

The crash?? Hmm, I think I've missed something. 0_o Anyways, I have some time on my hands at the moment, so expect a few reviews also. ^^

Gosh, once again, I'm really sorry for disappearing and I'll try not to do that again! *hugs*


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