Please up data it i love it

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please hurry up with rest i love it xx

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dont hate you??? its kinda hard at this pointtt. im sooo frustrated!!!
so that means ur writting is good.

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i love this writting technique!!! awesome style and voice!

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its amazing!123457891234567891234567/10

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its good!! so far!! its AMAZING!

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AMAZING~!!! is all i can say!!

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that was really good!! i loved it!!!

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awe!! that was so sad!! it was really well written!! i loved it!!! even though it like made me cry it was good!!

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aweee!! that was really cute!! thats so sweet!! its really sad though!! but its cute!!!

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please update soon! i love this story.

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this is a interesting story. lots of drama, but very entertaning. I think you devolped the characters in an interesting way, and the plot is intriguing. I would advise a bit more plot and a bit less drama becuase its starting to remind me a tad bit of a daytime soap. but i still like it more that i do daytime soaps of course! its just an idea...UPDATE SOON!

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Please upload more!!! This story is good, and I was pretty sure it wouldn't be easy for harry to get Ginny back after he left. Now they are together again. I love the part with Molly because she is so smart and such a good mum that it makes scense.

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I liked this, but I have two notes:
The italics aren't working. They're not giving any effect really and it's tricky to read.
Ginny had six brothers, not seven. She's the seventh child.

I liked Ginny's section a lot, but found Harry's was pretty useless. It didn't do much for me, really. I think it would be better without it. And the change from 3rd to 1st person when you switched from Ginny to Harry was bizarre.

I think you wrote the bit about Fred and George well. Good job.

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I'm glad they decided to be practical and responsible about things.

Author's Response: so was i, so was i :-) to be honest i had no plans to let them go all the way at least not yet. as in the book they barely dated for any time and 2 i feel they are still young in the relationship and in themselves not to suddenly jump into bed together. just like ron and herminoe will not be getting married/engaged any time soon. :-) i'm glad you are enjoying the story. jenx.

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yay yay yay. woot. :)

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yay about freakin time. :)

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wow. that's incredibly sneaky and gross... but it makes for a fantastic plot. Good Job. Still wondering about some stuff but I'll def keep reading.

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while this plot is ever so riveting... the fact remains that colin is dead. Everytime his name is mentioned I get sooo sad. I've taken to calling him nigel while I read. I'm really really anxious to finally figure out what the H... E double hockey sticks is going on.

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ummm... I'm intrigued and impatient. I wanna know what's going on. My only correction: colin died in DH. :( you may want to change that name.

Author's Response: ah . . . . .the inacuracys! *imagine me blush terribly* the worst thing is i don't remember much i haven't had time ot go back and re read it certain points are a missing to me so bare with me. thank you for reading. Jenx. :-)

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I just stumbled across this story and found it really enjoyable so far. :) I plan on reading the rest of it so you'll probably be getting periodic reviews from me!

Great Job.

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Thankfully an happier chapter. I definatly enjoyed this chapter. ^_^

10/10

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Im sorry but this is so sad. But I think thats whats making me carry on. I'm looking forward to the happier chappies.

10/10

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