loved it! Ive only heard about her in the books so this was good.Author's Response: Thank you! Good to know I wrote her well. Report Review
Aie, me. This all too good. Onto the next!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy them!! Report Review
Very interesting. The soulmate part is intriguing, as I have toyed around with that idea for a fic myself. Some will probably scoff at it, the same way Bill did. I think this is very sweet. I always wondered how he and Fleur found each other. Lovely.Author's Response: I think some people would find the soulmate idea a little weird or stupid, but I really wanted to do that for them. I'm not sure if I believe in it or not, but it was nice to create such a scenario for them. I'm so glad you enjoyed it - it was fun to write! Report Review
Beautiful. Just like Fleur, just like Bill ...this story was beautiful. That's what i felt when i read this at first. i always tried to imagine how Bill and Fleur would have gotten together and this fit perfectly to the way i had imagined. Perfect, amazing, brilliant and cute is how i would describe this. I'm glad you used the soul mate concept will B/F and not with Arthur/Molly or with Harry/Ginny they just seem so perfect with each other and i loved how she called her "Beel". Perfect writing, beautiful description. Thousand out of ten $_$
~AmieAuthor's Response: I always saw them as connecting through their Gringotts job, so I simply gave them an excuse to be closer to each other :) A lot of the other couples seemed destined to be together because they work so well, but Bill and Fleur are such a strange pairing (I was surprised when I first read that they were together) that I wanted to add another level to their story. I'm thrilled that it worked well! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Aw this was so sweet! I loved how Fleur was trying to teach Bill about the special connection they had and Bill was skeptical about it, until they kissed.
I also liked how Bill was not truly affected by Fleur's charm. I had never really thought of that, and it's nice to see someone who is not entirely obsessed with her looks. :]
This was a great one-shot! Loved it! 10/10.
Just one question: Are you going to make the girls kiss the guys first throughout all the First Kiss series? :P
~EstrellaAuthor's Response: It came to my attention in the books that while Ron and Harry stopped trying to do stupid things in Fleur's presence, they continued to get a bit love-struck while she was around. Bill, however, seemed perfectly fine. So, thus bloomed the 'soul mate' storyline :) I think Bill finds her absolutely gorgeous, but he's able to see past all her beauty to who she is. He was certainly the only one who seemed to know her true character (before his attack), so I wanted to give them a special bond. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and for the answer to your question, you'll have to read the rest! Report Review
I've never been a big fan of Fluer, but you've done this so well that I might change my opinion of her! ThanksAuthor's Response: Wow, thanks!! That's a great compliment!! I didn't like her at first either, until she refused to leave Bill. She really showed her true character there, and I'm so glad. Thanks for the review! Report Review
hahahahaha this is great! i like the idea of the solemate. the one man that can over see the beauty!
MELAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I wanted Bill to seem practical (in the sense that he at first says he doesn't believe in them), but I also wanted him to be passionate enough to consider the possibilty. I really like Bill and Fleur together. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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