I really like this so far! Very well writen :)
Hope to see more soon!Author's Response: Awh, thankyou! xx Report Review
I like this I am really into the darker angsty thing at the moment!
Are you planning on updating soon? please do!
SarahAuthor's Response: Oooh, perhaps, maybe. Report Review
Loved it! i really like this story and im soo excited to see whaere yuor gonna go with it! update A.S.A.P! Report Review
Good chapter, but it's really different from your other work. Well, update soon, and great chapter! I like Aceline. She seemes unsure of herself and just follows other peoples orders. She seems like a daddy's girl, though. Is that the image you were trying to send? Report Review
Ok, I'm not going to say that this attempt at a darker fic is crap -because it is definitly not!
I know it's difficult to balance fanfics and you know...real life...but this story is really compelling! I want to know what happens to Ace (as you just know she'll always be called) and what happens to Sirius.
You can tell their relationship is different from his interactions with other 'purebloods'
love the fact that Ace is an unconvinced follower of covnention. I don't hold much hope for a happy ending -darker fics have a habit of being, well...dark- but I'm positivly certain you will do the plot justice.
10/10 for originality, snappy dialogue and really interesting characterisation Report Review
So far I really like it, it's a very interesting introduction.
Already I don't much care for the 'hiatus'.
But then that's my problem with well written WIP =) Report Review
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