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Review #1, by Goddess182 The Last Time

13th January 2010:
i love it so much, id like you to expand on it maybe a little because we all know how lily is feeling her and we've all had to to this as well and to really connect with her like this is touching but perhaps a little more is needed to the story

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. --Kate/RP

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Review #2, by prettypinkpony The Last Time

6th April 2009:
awww, you based this on one of your breakups? that's so sweet and yet sad... :( but i thought that this fic was really nice. it made sense and all. 10/10


Author's Response: Yeah, it was on a break up that really hurt at the time. Funny thing is--now that I look back on it, I realize that I'm not even sad anymore; we had to break up.

Thanks so much for the sweet reviews,

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Review #3, by Lil lily71 The Last Time

5th November 2008:
This was so sad but wonderful. I really felt for Lily, it was the right move for her to make, being hurt so many times can really affect a person, it was sad but i was glad that she did it. She needed to be free of him. Brilliant writing, 10/10. I am adding this to my favourites, good work Kate. =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

This really had to happen with me, so I feel like Lily was an extension of myself, you know? Thanks for understanding this piece!


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