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Reading Reviews for The Ultimate Betrayal
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Cherrycola_chick8 The Confrontation

15th July 2009:
hey, great story, WHY does all your banners say janeaustenheir on it?

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Review #2, by e.mo The Confrontation

19th June 2009:
oooh i like this story

update soon please
i think there should be more Lily/scorpius stories

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Review #3, by Mairim & co. The Confrontation

9th November 2008:
HI, I dont know if you read your reviews but if you do and you`re reading this then I would like to ask you to continue writting because its been more then a month that you haven`t up-dated and I would really like to know what happens with the Lily/Scorp/Rose thing.
Thank you.

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Review #4, by SunnyRae The Confrontation

12th October 2008:
Ouch! For a minute there I didn't think Lily was going to get through that without getting back at Rob somehow! Good for Lily! I nice slap would have been the cherry! But perhaps hitting him with the "I know about you and Denise" bit was a harder slap in the face then any hand-to-face contact would ; )
Nice work! I'll be waiting for more!
Sunny

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Review #5, by gwen marie The Confrontation

7th October 2008:
Oh no, you lost your reviews :(

and you changed your penname, lol

anyhoo.i love this story. it's super...and i have the feeling you are going to make Lily pretty kick-ass. keep up the awesome writing!

~~~gwen

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Review #6, by janeaustenheir The Confrontation

7th October 2008:
Just wondering how you got your name on these stories. I actually wrote these, and I'm doing everything I can to get them back into my account.

Author's Response: Sorry about your stories... It was a glitch or whatever from the site. I contacted the staff about it and they're trying to get things back to normal!
Promise I wont hurt your stories though! Just checking the reviews to see if you would try and get through that way! Good thing you did! I'm glad I actually know who I'm playing 'host' to at the moment but I promise I wont touch a thing or change anything of yours!
Um... If you wanted to contact me or something I can give you an email address. It must feel a little unsettling to have someone you don't know have complete control of your work. Try Raenshadow(at)aol(dot)com if you had any questions or anything!
Again sorry about taking over your profile. It wasn't my idea or my intention to do so. It just happened...
Sunny


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Review #7, by VERONICA The Confrontation

4th October 2008:
You changed your penname? Its nice I like it. Anyway I loved this chapter. Lily finally confronted Rob!! Pease update soon I love this story!! Sorry to ask you again but Lily is on her fifth year right? And Scorpius is in Ravenclaw? Sorry to ask again but I forgot!

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