*SOB* :'( so sad and amazing Report Review
How come I've never read this before? It's so sweet, and yet so sad... I have never read such a one-shot before. It's so beautifully written and I mean it.
-Patty Report Review
Ok I'm not some one that cries easly at all so I didn't cry...
but half way throught I did feel my eyes tearing up and burning. You did an amazing job writting this story. The emotions were so real, I could feel them...even if I didn't cry. Report Review
Wow. You weren't kidding about the tissue warning. Nicely done! Report Review
i loved it but the ending SHOCKED me!
how would he manage to take his wife with him to the 'other side'?
push her down the stairs?
creep up at her when she's least expecting it and yell 'BOO' causing her to have a heart attack?
How would he do it? if he's a ghost,i mean, how can he push her down the stairs? i guess he COULD go with #2 but then again...ur the author not me!
~Annie(",)Author's Response: LMAO, this cracked me up. Hahahaha. Totally had me laughing for a bit. :P I just assumed that Hermione fell asleep and died ;)
Thanks for the review, Annie! :D Report Review
This is so sweet an sad. Report Review
oh my goshhh
that's the cutest/sad thing ive ever read in my life!! Report Review
aww :( poor hermonie, but its good thet she is going to be with ron, but what poor harry, he is the only one left, and the kids are going to be a mess. but this was a great story, :) Report Review
Wow. This is amazing. I was practically sobbing while
I read it. It provoked so many emotions in me, mainly
because you portrayed the situation in such a real and
honest way. I couldn't have better put into words how
I'd feel in a situation like this. Many, many, many kudos.
Not since DH have I cried this much over something I've
read, ha. Report Review
ooh. so good. I could feel the emotion and everything. Thanks for the tissue warning, by the way=]], I needed it. The ending was spunktacular when Ron visited Hermione and they left together. I'm not one for religion, but you totally pulled it off. GREAT JOB~ 10/10 Report Review
oh my god, i am honestly, seriously crying so hard right now and i haven't done that for sooo long in a fan fic, jeez its so sad, it hit me the whole, you were my best friend, lover, husband, father to my friend.
gosh, i need a tissue!
xoxo Report Review
It looks like this story has been up for nearly a year, but I just ran across it last night, and it's one of the most beautiful things I've ever read! You captured human grief perfectly. This has been truly inspiring. 10/10 Report Review
I had to take a few minutes to stop crying before I could write this review. That was absolutely AMAZING. I'm still sniffling into a tissue. It was so beautiful, so moving, so romantic, and so sad. I really can't even find the words. If I could rate you a thousand out of ten, I would. Report Review
Alright, so first off-- Did I not review this here on HPFF yet? It's seriously just sitting here review-less? Or did the server delete it? I'm shocked and horrified if I never reviewed it... because you KNOW how much I adored it!
Well, since it's your birthday today, I shall re-review... or just, review, depending...
Okay, so, let me take a deep breath, first of all, because every time I read this, I burst into tears, which is, as you well know, just how I like it. So, thank you, dear, for writing my OTP, and making it as heart wrenching and angst-filled as I love. We know how it is, don't we? The loss of my D-bot would leave me just as Hermione is left, bereft in an endless sea of grief as the insurmountable waves of depression, loneliness and emptiness crash down upon her over and over again. It's horrifying, but nice to know you can relate, and in such a way as to give you the ability to write this beautiful (albeit SAD) piece.
There are so many truly perfect lines here, each showing more perfectly than the last what desperation the loss of such complete love leaves you with. I started to copy and paste a few of my favorite sections here for you, but ended up basically pasting your one-shot into this comment box so... lol, I stopped. I cannot describe to you, though, how piercing Hermione’s inability to breathe was. I could FEEL her grief, so palpable was it, and Jessi, it has left me aching... again!
You are BRILLIANT!
Okay, we'll I'm sitting here crying... again. I love you, and I love this fic more than I can describe. It is absolutely perfect in every possible way. There's nothing more I can say, really, except to thank you, for a truly amazing dedication on what is and will be one of my reigning favorite OTP stories.
~C Report Review
Heya Jessi. I know I r&r'd before the crash, but when I saw my review had been deleted, I had to come back and review again. This is such a fantastic story, I'm near crying again. Hermione/Ron has never really been my favourite pairing, but the emotion you've put into this fic is just amazing. I really, really love it. And the ending...*cries* just beautiful, Jessi. YOU ARE LOVE!
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