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Review #1, by Harry and Ginny The Invitation

25th July 2009:
this chapter is great and interesting however i found some mistakes.
1. An one hour I have to decide which robes to where - In one hour I have to decide which robes to wear
2. you refuse to actually apparte - you refuse to actually apparate
3. got a present from Santa Clause... - got a present from Santa Claus...

i hope i could help u. what is Lavender going to do now? will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Review #2, by Harry and Ginny Prologue: Labels

1st July 2009:
i was checking what stories u had and this one caught my attention. i can't wait to read the next chapter. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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