This is excellent!
The Elite is brilliantly written, I think I will have to see if you have any other stories :)Author's Response: I really appreciate the review, thank you! Report Review
The only reason it gets a nine out of ten is because of a couple of teensy little errors, but on the whole, an amazing insight to the world of the pureblood elite, for lack of a better phrase. Quite along my frame of mind, amazing.Author's Response: Thank you soo much for the review
Yeah I know I need to edit it
I just cant seem to find the time lol Report Review
The picture you paint of elite society is compelling, I like the sense of informal connections, the "old boys' network." It's chilling to read your final paragraph, knowing what will happen to most of these people in the future. One critique: at first, I thought that Sirius was actually attending the party, but then I re-read the paragraph and I think you meant to imply he was spying, but this wasn't totally clear. But overall I liked it.Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I reread it and I see what you're saying, I have a few typos I need to fix on it and I'll be sure to fix this as well to help clear it up!!! Report Review
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