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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Pretense Of Perfection Kitchen tales

8th July 2014:
Hi again!! Back for another review...

I definitely enjoyed this story, although it definitely wasn't my favorite that you've written. I think the beginning of this start out really strong and absolutely hilarious. I don't want to say the end dropped off or was bad, but I was honestly hoping that the insanely funny humor would continue throughout the entire piece. But, that's probably just me.

I think you did perfect with Fred and George's characterization. They were exactly as I've always imagined them, right down to their speech, actions, and mannerisms. Perfect job there. I liked Harper, and I think she seemed pretty grounded, but again, she wasn't my favorite OC ever. That could definitely be because it's a much shorter story, and I'm more used to reading very long ones that usually contain loads of details and internal dialogue and all that. Like I said before, she's definitely not bad, just different.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors. the plot was pretty good, although I think it might have ended more on the slower side as far as pacing goes. Still a very enjoyable little read, and it definitely brought a smile to my face (:

---house Cup 2014 Review---
Pretense of Perfection, gryffindor

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Review #2, by Jellyman Kitchen tales

12th June 2009:
Haha, that was really cute! And funny, and sweet, and a whole lot of other adjectives :) I love the spy song, haha, I was giggling while I read it. Thanks for the great read :D

Author's Response: Aww thank you for the pleotra of adjectives. The spy song was tons of fun to write. Thanks for the sweet reveiw, Jellyman :)

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Review #3, by IS bookworm Kitchen tales

22nd May 2009:
OOH!! I'd love another chapter! The Hogsmead day could be really interesting! I loved it! That's a great rule. I love singing my own spy songs! :7)

Author's Response: Nope, its only a one-shot. Haha. It was a fun challenge to participate in. Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by luvjamesnoliver Kitchen tales

22nd October 2008:
First off I want to say that I love Fred's song. If I were Harper I would have been rolling on the ground laughing too.
For your first Fred and George fic you did beautifuly. You did their little twin timing things great.
It would be quite amusing to see what would happen if J.K. had introduced some muggle flims to the twins. The Bonds flims would be at the top of the list followed closely by The Ghostbusters!
And luckly Harper gets to spend the day with Fred. ;)
This was a hilrious fic. Definitly going on my favorites list.

Author's Response: Harper and the twins were SO much fun to write. It was my first full attempt at humor and I was so glad it went over so well. Thanks for the favorites add ;). You are awesome!

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