what's going to happen now? Great chapter.^_^

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Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'm sorry. This story really ended up being put on hold. It isn't abandoned, and I still am working on it. It is just confusing to have too many stories going at once.

Thanks for the ten!
-N.E.P.

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Great chapter!!!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know.

-N.E.P.

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So sweet! Your descriptions in this chapter were just fantastic, it was easy to picture the scene as though I was there. I love how Lily had wanted to have the wedding in Petunia's garden, but Petunia didn't even know, it was a nice little detail. I really just loved this whole wedding scene (though it was so different from the James and Lily wedding in my own fic), I really liked your take on it.

Author's Response: I really worked hard on this scene. I was using it to practice for a wedding in my other story, but it really took on a life of its own.

Thanks for reading!

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Cute opening chapter. It was nice seeing Dumbledore having such a big part in James and Lily's big day. It was sweet too that Petunia was there and she actually seems genuinely pleased for her sister. You described Lily's dress beautifully, I could picture it in my mind. Your spelling and grammar were both good, so I really don't have any criticisms to give. It was a lovely introduction to the story.

Author's Response: I think Lily and Petunia used to be very good friends as well as sisters. Despite their differences, I don't think Petunia would stay apart from Lily on such a big day for her.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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