2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Kt_Clare_Lily Prologue: Meet Fay and Adè

28th December 2008:
Not bad, i don't like the French bit it confuses me a bit and i think you go into the story a little to fast, i think it should start with them in the post Hogwarts time and then something happens which takes them to the Marauder's but otherwise i think it is going to turn out a great story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. It will start out in the Next Gen time period. I am just having trouble with inspiration at the moment. If there isn't a chapter up for a while that is because I have started another story that is a lot more inspiring. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by reviewer Prologue: Meet Fay and Adè

3rd October 2008:
Not bad, not bad at all.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review...I finally have a new one!!!

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