Gah I really should check stories before I start reading them!
This is really good. All your characters are three dimensional and believable. You have built the plot up wonderfully and you can't possibly leave it there. I want to know what happens!! I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I would love to see it continued.

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Awww, I wish we got to read this next chapter you mentioned. As I said before, there are virtually no good Krum stories out there.

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I love this so far. There aren't nearly enough Krum stories out there, in my opinion at least, and this one looks quite promising.

There are quite a few characters at this point, but so far they are pretty easy to distinguish from one another, so I don't think you need to worry there! I really can't wait to keep reading and see where you take this story. It's an excellent idea, and although I have my own Krum/OC in the works, it really isn't anything like this.

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oh keep going!!! It is so different, and totally intriguing
I don't trust Ramsey though, something about him seems shifty and greedy. Poor Krumbly Cake, caught up in so much...
jb

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so this story is honestly one of the more original things ive read on this site in a while. very well written, teh characters are interesting and the plot is very captivating and im rather anxious to know what happens next, so please do update soon!

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Oh no! He does come back, right? Sophie will see him again, right?

This is a truly amazing story, because there aren't many stories featuring Krum, and there are even fewer that are this interesting or this well written! Keep up the good work! It's pretty ingenious. I'm really digging this story.

:)

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Ooooh! Very interesting! =D
I love Sophie! And Krum! Can't wait to see more of him.
REading on now!
10/10

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I am madly in love with this story! It is so funny, original, and engaging. Sophie is very likable, and your characterization of Viktor is perfect! I've always sort of had a thing for Viktor b/c he had such good taste to choose Hermione over all those other fangirls in the Goblet of Fire. I never thought that I would find someone who could write about him just like I imaged him and you do. I really hope that you update sometime; however, I definitely understand that real life is more important than the world of fanfiction. I think that you have set the scene for such an action-packed story and I can't wait to see what happens!

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LOVE the plot! update sooon xxx

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i do love this story.. A LOT.

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love love lovey love.

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i really really really do love your story.. you're an amazing writer

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And so the plot thickens! This is so so goood. I am completely in love with this story. Sophie's character is so deep and awkward and Victor, Victor's introduction is perfect. I can't wait to read more!

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ive been hoping youd update the story by now but it seems youve given up on it or are to busy to do so...
the storys really good, so please continue it!

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I want to say that, yes I like Ramsy, but I'm kinda suspicious of him... Did you mean to do it that way? I am hooked on this story, and I do not say that lightly! You NEED to update, because this story is realy good.

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love it! the characters are really non-cliche and good, and you're an amazing writer. x

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this story intruiges me..
original :D
x

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I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is one of my favorites. I haven't noticed a single grammar mistake in the entire story, and the plot is so exciting=D 10/10

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"Before you ask, yes, I’m wearing panties with polka dots, which I know is a pattern you find to be incredibly sexy when it comes to women’s lingerie."

I could not stop laughing! Great job!

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That was another great chapter=D Penelope is so funny. Also, you did a marvelous job of writing Victor's accent.

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Eeek, this is so exciting! Must keep reading... great job!

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Great second chapter. I particularly loved the part about Sophie getting dressed in the dark because of the pictures...hehe.

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I just discovered this story, and I love it! This chapter is so cute and funny... you did a great job developing all of your characters=D 10/10!

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really good,
update soon

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poor poor sophie
she is doing wuite well though, considering she is making an idiot of herself in front of the love of her life...
really good

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