aww this was cute! its really sad tho :( and weird, my name is Kayleigh too but i have a Y in my name! hahaha :) Report Review
This was a strange yet well written story. What I really liked about it was you werent exactly sure what was going on, but knew that it couldnt be good. It was aso very different to most next generation stories you read, or just the stories here in general. You did a great job choosing to write about something different and making it wonderful.
Your use of tension combined with description was wonderful. I almost felt like I was in the room there with everyone. You kept my focus on the story the whole way through. It was like reading one long cliff hanger and getting an answer at the end. I really liked it :)
I like how you had all the Weasleys and Potters together in one room, but kept us not knowing exactly where they were. This was clever because even though we werent exactly sure where they were, it wasnt confusing.
I cant believe what happened. It was quite a shock, but was wonderful to read everyones reactions to what Bill said. I really really liked this. You took a not used idea and turned it into something wonderful. Great job! Report Review
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