This is so well-written- so... quality!
There are many things you leave to imagination here: as to what happened and why, but in a way I think those little things make your story even better.
The atmosphere in this little chapter is so good. It enchantes the reader; it makes her feel your story, your characters and above all their emotions.
I couldn't even hate the unhappy ending... It was written in such a way that I loved it as well!
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This is very well written! Chilling, almost. I wonder what it is about, but the mystery of it is nice too. Your writing flows so beautifully and you have a way with words. Thanks for sharing this with us!
xTanya Report Review
I loved it, but i desperately want to know why? did i miss somethign or is it jsut not in there, I really want to know...Author's Response: It's just not there :) It was really so people would question it and think about it for themselves. Report Review
Wow, ok, I think that's all I can say. Wow. This was incredibly sad, but a different change of pace. Nice job. ~ElizaAuthor's Response: Thankyou so much! :) I'm gutted almost all of my reviews for this have gone :( Report Review
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