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Review #1, by the_edge_of_love

11th December 2011:

This is so well-written- so... quality!

There are many things you leave to imagination here: as to what happened and why, but in a way I think those little things make your story even better.

The atmosphere in this little chapter is so good. It enchantes the reader; it makes her feel your story, your characters and above all their emotions.

I couldn't even hate the unhappy ending... It was written in such a way that I loved it as well!

Amazing work!

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Review #2, by writeyourheartout

Smoke Without Fire

13th July 2010:

This is very well written! Chilling, almost. I wonder what it is about, but the mystery of it is nice too. Your writing flows so beautifully and you have a way with words. Thanks for sharing this with us!

xTanya

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Review #3, by jesi lily

Smoke Without Fire

4th July 2009:

I loved it, but i desperately want to know why? did i miss somethign or is it jsut not in there, I really want to know...

Author's Response: It's just not there :) It was really so people would question it and think about it for themselves.

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Review #4, by CelticGoddess81

Smoke Without Fire

6th November 2008:

Wow, ok, I think that's all I can say. Wow. This was incredibly sad, but a different change of pace. Nice job. ~Eliza

Author's Response: Thankyou so much! :) I'm gutted almost all of my reviews for this have gone :(

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