Interesting. I do hope you can update soon!! Report Review
It's really, really interesting and has such a good plot line (even this chapter by itself has an excelent plot), but I think if you add a bit more detail and narration between the dialouge it'd be even better. Still love it, though. Keep 'em commin'! I'll be waitin'. ;) Report Review
"The only way that I would ever be civil to him would be if someone broke out of Azkaban..."
*smirk* love the irony darling
I think I'm really gonna like this story. It's humorus with good narration and only a few spelling/grammar errors. The plot seems really unique and interesting from what I can make of it so far. The only thing I would really recommend is making your chapters a little longer. Great work! I can't wait to read more. Report Review
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