"James, you cannot fly! Do not jump out that window!" PRICELESS!

Yes, this wasn't the best it could have been, but it was a fun read and was absolutely hilarious!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: That's the problem with a plot bunny that ends up in a scratched itch. Usually a good start with a lackluster finish, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!

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Another good story! The only reason I'm angry with you is 'cause it's not longer! Well, better end it before it gets to boring. But it's a good story!

X

Author's Response: Yup! I didn't want to drag it out past it's time. I'm glad you liked it!

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haha... sounds, erm, interesting so far ;P

Author's Response: Doesn't it just? haha

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I totally noticed the little "Anastasia" reverence. (:

~K.K~

Author's Response: Hehe I couldn't resist!

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This sounds hilarious, so far. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy it!

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awesome :) :) :) :) :) x

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im luving this story. :) :) :) :) :) x

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i dont see how u could be disappointed with this chapter. I actually started howling with laugher when Vika and Hannah came down the stairs and the Marauders had formed a band. Its actually hilarious! well done! :) :) :) :) :) x

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad! I guess I was worried about it being cheap humor.

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no matter what u say this was still an awesome chapter. thumbs up and rating 10/10!!! x

Author's Response: Thanks for the confidence!

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this is rly funny! well done on a successful chapter! :) x

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lol that was flippin hilarious lol i loved the story! that last line was great! you are a great author

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

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I love this story!!

I think the parting line is hillarious!

I was wondering if I could use the book in a story for the 'Next Generation'. I could have James' and Sirius' notes in it.

But if you don't want me to, I totally understand, it's fine.

You are amazing!

:)

Author's Response: No problem at all! I'm completely flattered that you want to! :D

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Wow. that was amazing!!! and hilarious!

=)

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! :D

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Haha! That was fab =)

The bit when they forgot the baby and that last bit - "James, you cannot fly! Do not jump out that window!” were hilarious, I loved it =)

And Sirius and Vika! Yay!

10/10 =D

Author's Response: Wooohooo! Glad you think so. :D

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"thought it was all that dope he was smoking . . ." maybe that's part of what he had ingested in the past few hours, other than alcohol of course. :) I enjoyed your ending, it closed the story off nicely while still leaving space for our own future thoughts.

Author's Response: Haha, I think he ingested many, MANY things over the course of the past few hours, lol. :)

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Holy crap, you've finished everything lately. The end wasn't bad; it was even amusing. Especially since I could definitely see James getting drunk and jumping out a window.

Author's Response: I know! I was on such a roll, and I wanted to get all these finished before the summer really began.

I'm certainly glad to hear the ending wasn't bad. I was a bit worried . . .

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that was a bad ending

Author's Response: I'm sorry . . . ?

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Great one, and I love the last line. It really made me laugh! I love this story, and the ending was great, even if you think it's bad. I love Dumbledore too, and when he siad that Remus and Hannah onyl got an E becasue they were divoreced!

Author's Response: I'm definitely glad you like it . . . I was worried about the last few chapters because they didn't just flow out as the first two or three did.

But I am a bit happy with that last line. :D

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Dumbly-dor ;] cracks me up, as do you.

Liz

Author's Response: Oh, Dumbeldore, that nutter. lol. :D

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And in a year or so, James and Lily will actually be married and start planning round two, this time with a live baby.

Author's Response: Hopefully they get an 'O' again. ;)

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That was good, like a passing of the torch. Or better yet, tossing the garter at a wedding.

Author's Response: Haha, tossing the garter is funnier. Let's go with that one. :D

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I thought James had blown it at the end, when he said no to Lily. But he saved it, and that was good.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, all that book-reading for nothing, right?

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Wow, James sounds like he never needed that book at all.

Author's Response: Yeah, he did, though. But he wasn't quite as hopeless as some thought him to be.

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Is that book like the "12 Fail-Safe Ways to Charm Witches" that Ron gave Harry for his birthday? Maybe the beginnings of it?

Author's Response: You know, I hadn't thought of that before. But, perhaps it is an older version of it.

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Nice enough, I suppose. I didn't really see the point of this one, though.

Author's Response: There isn't really, lol.

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