you're story is very funny and i enjoyed reading it!

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- Laura

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Ha, hilarious lol, talk about a wedding disaster:)
Before i get started on my review could i just ask, are you an artist at TDA because i swear i've seen you on the boards before?
Anyways, here's what i thought of your fanfiction...
Characterization:
Hermione: She was very in character, despite the fact she was married to malfoy you still succeeded in making everything realistic. She was still her usual worrying self, trying to take more responsibility then she could handle, even on her wedding day lol. Everything about the way you described her was very realistic, you stuck to the canon very well. Yous showed a much more laid back side to her in this fanfiction, you really got across her exact feelings for draco, just by the way she looked at him, great job with that.
Draco: Hilarious, i love your version of him. You mangaed to keep him in character too. You showed a lot more mature side to him, and i could really tell he loved Hermione, though he still had that cocky side to him lol. I like the way you've mellowed the coldness between Draco, Ron and Harry, that was great too.
Ron and Harry: I've decided to put them together because they didn't play a very big part in this, you stuck to their canons very well, and they had a slight funny, carefree side to them in this fanfiction, again, glad to see their seven year old school grudge for Malfoy has finally wore off.
Crabbe and Goyle: I actually put these two together because i cannot tell them apart lol. They were hilarious. They came across as their usual dumb selves. great job with them.
Lucius: Ha ha lol, laughing so hard when he had a go at Crabbe and Goyle. He's still that Mr Nasty, even though he's no longer in Azkaban:)
Mary: I think her main purpose in this fanfixtion was to give Hermione an excuse to recount the disasters of her wedding day. She claimed to be one of Narcissa's friends and oyu could really tell, she came across as the warm, ever soslightly snobbish woman who wanted in on all of the gossip. I bet she was glad Draco and Hermione didn't fail to dissapoint lol.
Plotline and Development: I loved this plot, it was very:beginning, middle and end, except muddled up because of the flahback lol. I loved it none the less, and i thoroughly enjoyed reading this one-shot:)
Mood:Romance, Humour, Excetera.
Grammar: This was great, except from in your third paragraph where you jumbled two word classes up in a sentance. And in future, make sure you write in one tense, rather than skipping tenses in the same sentance:) it's just constructive critisism you can either choose to ignore or not, i'm just trying to be helpful:)
Spelling and punctuation: Both perfect, you did a goos job with them:)
Descriptive language: Spot on, decriptions weren't too heavy or week, detail was just right:)
Overall:Brilliant fanfiction, very enjoyable to read, i'll definitley favourite this, and i'll chack out some of your other fanfictions when i have the time.
10/10
Goodluck with future fanfictions
Katie
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Author's Response: Hello there!
Yes I am an artist on TDA lol, well spotted.
Thanks for the detailed review, and I'm glad you liked it enough to comment on everything, much appreciated!
And yeah, sorry about some spelling errors, it was written quite a while ago before I discovered the magic of spell check lol.
Again thanks for reviewing!

~ Laura

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cute fic.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Ox-LAURA-xO

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haha! Oh, my, that was funny. I can't wait to read the sequel. Merlin! A hippo, that ought to be good. Anyway, I loved how messed up their wedding was, great one-shot!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Ox-LAURA-xO

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ahahahaha i definiatly enjoyed this one shot what a wedding
im going to go read your other one shot now :D

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I wish the weddings I have attended could be as entertaining lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Ox-LAURA-xO

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HI! What a great story! If you can please email me for the sequel that would be great I dont think we are allowed to put email address down but here it is: ifrah . ansari (at) gmail DOTcom

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Author's Response: Glad you liked it and I will send you something out when it is posted ;) Thanks for taking the time to review!!

Ox-LAURA-xO

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I loved it! It was even better because I just read a really sad story before this one.

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you liked it. Nothing like a good old happy story to cheer us up lol.

Ox-LAURA-xO

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omg this was so funny i think that it was a good plot

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks fore reviewing ;)

Happy Holidays!

Ox-LAURA-xO

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That was fantastic. The perfect "horrible" wedding. ha ha ha I am still giggling. Thank you!

Happy Holidays to you and yours,
HG4eva

Author's Response: Haha yeah, nothing beats a disater of a wedding eh? Thanks for reviewing XD

Happy Holidays!

Ox-LAURA-xO

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That was a good read :D

Author's Response: Thanks glad you like it, it was fun to write.

Ox-LAURA-xO

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omg omg omg that is so funny i love it.


laura

Author's Response: Hehe, it is rather amusing yes XD! Thanks for reviewing.

Ox-LAURA-xO

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What happened with the hippo? I wanna know lol! That was really sweet and funny, I was laughing so hard that I think I was worrying my mom. Write more soon xx

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, I am trying to finish the sequel soon but at the moment college works takes priority I'm affraid.

Ox-LAURA-xO

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