Ohh!! So sweet! I love it!

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Wow! That would be weird!!

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Very good! You hooked me right away!

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brilliant work!!! i loved every minute of it.. i love how u had remus and sirius provide lily with advice and th hilarious comments made by them. i just really enjoyed this story from start to finish! :D infinity/10!!

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aww, poor lily!!! nice job!!! im loving this story!!

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hehe, another great one ;P

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lmfao, great story!! i love this chapter and i cant wait to read more ;D

Author's Response: :D :D :D you have no idea how happy that makes me!

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"No, Sirius, I just imagined him running out of that room as if I was the devil incarnate or something" hahaha :D
"I just thought they'd be pretty attractive together…"you gotta love sirius

so yup it was great :P

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HAHAHA :D love! favrite quote:
"They really are very absorbent. They take in the knife rather well, allots you more opportunities to pierce them without having to waste food by getting a new one to mutilate." hahaha

Author's Response: she's a bit crazy, i know >.

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oh my goodness! (if you could hear how i said that you would be laughing at me). i love the character of Lily! it allows me to babble in my mind constantly. and i just love doing that!

Author's Response: lol, you have no idea how happy it makes me to read that!

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Loved it!
Great to see the marauders from a different perspective and I am a sucker for happy endings :)
Especially loved Lily's observations about men and life in general, loved how you portrayed Sirius, and loved seeing Remus have a little more backbone than one often sees in marauder fics.

Author's Response: oooh, thank you, i'm so glad to hear this, it truly means so much to me to read!

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very cliched. and enjoyable dont worry! :D xx

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discombobulated. aaah loving this, very whimsical ;D anywhoo next chappy here i come!

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omg its so awesome and cute i love james and lilz:)

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aww nice way of ending it :) i liked it

Author's Response: yay, wasnt too sure about it at lfirt but this does much to alleviate my trepidation over it.

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yeah the changes were perfect!! i wanted Lily to be a bit nicer or idk what. I love Sirius...very realistic... 10/10

Author's Response: lol, yes, she isn't always the sweetest person and can come off as extremely bitter, etc. but i simply figured it'd fit the whole cliche a bit better--the one guy who can break through the hard exterior, etc etc

thank you so much for reviewing

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squeal
I love this! They're so awesome :) 10/10

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The guy I told I liked actually said " I'm going to go hide in my corner now." Right after I told him.

Author's Response: aw, wow... i've never actually admitted that i loved a guy, i must admit... i'm a bit emotionally retarded, but i've cowered when they've made the proclamation, sadly enough...

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i do think that you should continue this story... It cant be that simple come on she is too endearing to leave it off like that. Anyway it was really good and i hope you can find it in your pessimistic heart to write somemore fun sarastic love story.

Author's Response: sadly it's like a romantic comedy, and that's about as deep in as it goes, but i may consider an epilogue after that delightful review...

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*drops review*


Love it!!!

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brilliant...absolutely brilliant. good job.

Author's Response: oh thank you, that is very kind of you to say.

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keep it up! I'm still laughing!

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Still cracking up on this end!

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Ohmygosh this is freaking HILARIOUS!

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I did enjoy it. It wasareally funny. Boy! it must have been fun to right generaly when i wrote everything to me was seven times funny then it really was reading it, but i had loads of fun reading.

10/10

Author's Response: lol, it was a nice break--writing that--i'll admit.

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