Um, first you made a mistake. I know you probably wanted to mention Fred, but it actually was George who gave Ron the spell. Also, I don't like your grammar but it's a decent story. Report Review
cute, not one of my faves though Report Review
THis is such an adorable story! I can't wait for the next chapter (I hope there is a next chapter!). Lily is just adorable! and so is Hugo! Your story is written very well. 10/10 ~Michelle Report Review
Um... This was a really good idea for a story. Unfortunately, the grammar wasn't very good, which made it a bit hard to understand at times. Report Review
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