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Review #1, by Lucy one down one to go

26th October 2010:
Um, first you made a mistake. I know you probably wanted to mention Fred, but it actually was George who gave Ron the spell. Also, I don't like your grammar but it's a decent story.

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Review #2, by harrypotterlvr one down one to go

13th August 2009:
cute, not one of my faves though

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Review #3, by Ron is my hero I know your secret.

7th December 2008:
THis is such an adorable story! I can't wait for the next chapter (I hope there is a next chapter!). Lily is just adorable! and so is Hugo! Your story is written very well.

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Review #4, by Fille_Magnifique one down one to go

22nd October 2008:
This was a really good idea for a story.
Unfortunately, the grammar wasn't very good, which made it a bit hard to understand at times.

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