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Review #1, by Lyra Holmes Chapter Twenty-eight: End Part III

30th November 2014:
Perfect perfect perfect!

Whispering is cannon to me.

I loved every second, but what happened to Liam, I wonder?

Thank you for the ride.

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Review #2, by Lyra Holmes Chapter Twenty-five: Act

30th November 2014:
I love this chapter! Their reunion is so beautiful.


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Review #3, by Lyra Holmes Chapter Twenty-two: Give

30th November 2014:

I'm so glad Scorpius had the chance to tell his story and now both he and Rose can heal.

A few things I didn't have the emotional strength to say in my last review:
1) I love Hugo and his relationship with Rose.
2) I love how Ron put his prejudice aside when Rose was in the hospital and just told her how much he loves her.
3) I love how perfectly you portray Hermione.
4) I love Al and Cecelia together.
5) I love Liam, Maegan and Jonathon.
6) The bachelorette party was probably the best thing I have ever read.
7) Malena. Is. Awesome.
8) Love all the healer stuff.
9) The short part about George being so lovely and going to tell Ron how well Rose was doing that day.

I just love Whispering and I can't stop crying.


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Review #4, by Lyra Holmes Chapter Eighteen: Fault

30th November 2014:
I want to start off this review by saying I love this story. I love the characters and I love the plot. I want you to know that you have done an amazing job as an author, and no matter what, I will stand by this story until the very end. Please keep in mind how much I love Whispering when you read the rest of this review, and know that some of the things I'm saying I say only because these characters and their story have touched me so severely I need to rant about my feelings somewhere. You may never see this because it's been a while since this story has been published, but I'm writing to you anyway.

I completely understand that you wanted to portray a realistic story and needed to show your readers the tragic reality that comes with the roller coaster of life, but it doesn't make me any less heartbroken over Rose's miscarriage. I will probably never forgive you for allowing that to happen to these characters, but at the same time I will forever be grateful to you for writing a story so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Thank you. Speaking from the point of view of someone who has been involved with a miscarriage, you have captured the emotion perfectly and portrayed how painful it is to perfection. Thank you again for being so considerate and consistent with reality.

Now for some things I don't agree with you on, keeping in mind that this is as far as I have read for the time being so I do not know if these issues are addressed in later chapters.

Firstly, Astoria's reaction when Scorpius returned. Judging from what I have seen of Astoria's character in your past chapters this scene wasn't consistent. The Astoria I have come to know in Whispering is kind and cares about her son more than anything or anyone else in the world. Upon seeing her son back at their home after learning he has lost his baby she would not demand answers from him for why he kept this secret from her. I am sure she would later, after months of everyone adapting to life after the miscarriage, address why Scorpius didn't feel he could tell her about his impending fatherhood, but she would not by any means assault him with her own selfish questions about keeping her ignorant of their situation the moment she sees him. She would hug him and hold him in her arms like the mother she is and let him cry over his loss in the midst of her embrace. She would be a mother first, and an egotistical confidante later.

Speaking on the topic of how everyone is treating Scorpius, so too comes my second point. It seems as though all the characters have forgotten that the baby was Rose AND SCORPIUS's baby. Yes, everyone should treat Rose with the kindness they have adopted in these past chapters, but they should be there for Scorpius too! Just because the baby wasn't physically inside of him doesn't mean he hasn't also suffered a great loss! These characters are his friends too, not just Rose's. However, speaking about Rose, I think you have stayed true to her character. I wouldn't expect her or anyone else in her position to behave differently to how she is acting. She is distraught and projecting her pain on whoever she feels deserves it, and, unfortunately, since Scorpius wasn't there with her when she needed him it makes sense that he is the one being targeted by her hatred of how unfair the world is, and I don't blame her for doing this. The other characters however should be there for both of their friends, Rose AND Scorpius, even if they keep Rose in the dark about how they are still maintaining a solid relationship with him. She needs to be treated with the care that both she and Scorpius deserve.

Despite my complaints you as an author should know you have done a remarkable thing. You have given me, and undoubtably many of your other readers, a reason to laugh, smile, hope, cry, rage and sit silently in shock over your story in, so far, no more than 18 chapters. You need to be commended, hell, you deserve an award! But all I can give you is this review, my admiration and my thanks. I will never forget Whispering no matter what my future holds. This story has somehow touched my heart in a way few stories have.

Your reader forever,

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Review #5, by sorp & rose are the best Chapter One: Lie

23rd June 2013:
okay I read this first chapter and knew it is going to be a great story.

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Review #6, by Lea Chapter Nine: Last

11th April 2013:
Okay great story and everything but I'm just saying. I don't think the chapter images really fit the description of some of the characters. For instance, the one of Draco. Although older, I would have been sure that he kept his pale skin and that his eyes did not change colour so drastically. His hair remained the same colour and just receded. Sorry, but I felt like I should point all this out. I have no idea whether this has been said to you before. Oh, and I'm pretty sure that Draco's middle name is Lucius.
However, your story is good. Really rather captivating.

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Review #7, by HopelessDreamer Chapter Twenty-eight: End Part III

1st February 2013:
I really loved this story!!! usually the scorose pairings tend to be a little typical but this was sooo original and i loved it i truely did. i hope u continue writing other stories!! i really liked how u explained everything in vast detail, because i know other stories dont and then you get confused haha :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

The story was a long time coming and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you again. :)

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Review #8, by DracoPrincess Chapter Seven: Guilt

22nd October 2012:
Yay I love this story

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks so much for reviewing :)

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Review #9, by AriesGirl40 Chapter Twenty-eight: End Part III

12th October 2012:
I loved the great detail you used to describe the rest of their marriage with children, that was a wonderful ending. I loved every chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

It's always nice to hear that a reader has enjoyed a work from start to finish!

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

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Review #10, by PotterHeadSinceBirth Chapter Twenty-eight: End Part III

11th October 2012:
AHHH I LOVED IT! Please write more soon, I love your writing style!

Author's Response: One chapter left, and it's finally up! Let me know what you think!

Thanks again for your review. I really appreciate it :)

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Review #11, by PotterHeadSinceBirth Chapter Seventeen: Fear

17th August 2012:
That awkward moment when you can't even read the authors note because your eyes are wayyy too blurry from tears. Amazing as always, if extremely sad.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I'm glad you enjoyed it, but saddened to hear how much the plot moved you to tears!

Thank you so much for your review! :)`

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Review #12, by HPforeverandalways Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

7th August 2012:
I loved it! By far one of the best stories I have read! Great job!

Author's Response: So glad you loved it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing - I truly appreciate it. :)

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Review #13, by TheHallow Chapter Three: Wait

5th August 2012:
Okay im going to be blunt... this story is annoying.
There is no raw emotion in it. it just sounds like "OH! Scorpious!" and "Oh! Rose, i love you." No offense but im not into it :/ sorry although you are a very good writer!

Author's Response: The first few chapters I admit are a little cheesy; blame it on my age when I was writing them.

I believe that the later chapter get a little more in-depth and heavier, so keep reading a little bit more and let me know what you think! Regardless, I appreciate your commentary and look forward to see what else you have to say!

Thanks again :)

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Review #14, by bomberchica Chapter Two: Late

23rd July 2012:
Nice work! :) I like it so far! But honestly, I was expecting some punches or something. And a grudge with Cecelia and Rose. I mean, they are girls...

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!

However, in response to being girls and holding grudges, Rose and Cecelia are best friends...Just keep that in mind.

Thanks again for reviewing!

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Review #15, by bomberchica Chapter One: Lie

23rd July 2012:
Hmm. I like it. It's turning out to be like a lot of Scorose stories I've read, but this is only the 1st chapter :) I'm going to try and to read and review as I finish chapters. Normally I'm horrible at it...

Author's Response: Thanks for your review - even if this is your only one! Thanks again!

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Review #16, by potterfan310 Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

16th February 2012:
you are a brilliant writer,and putting in the miscarriage was very brave of you,but you wrote it brilliantly i cried when she miscarried and when scorpius ended up in hospital,smiled at when they got back together at the end of chapter 25 and laughed at at cece and al and their lovelife (and rose and scorpius), i cried happy tears when their parents finally approved and they were officially back together (yay) and then engaged, i am so glad they got a happy ending and i am completely hooked i started reading at about 8:30pm and finished at 11:30pm i cannot wait for the 3rd installment of the epilouge and i really hope that it will be updated relly really soon 10/10
p.s not to be picky or anything but isn't noah a boy's name?

Author's Response: Thank you :) I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

This story was my baby for a really long time, and unfortunately it hasn't been officially finished, but it's almost there! I put a lot of careful thinking into it, and clearly you think it's paid off!

As for the name Noah for a girl, I just thought it was really adorable. Traditionally, it is a boy's name, but I thought I'd change it up. And for some reason, I really like girls having traditionally-boys names...

Thanks again!

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Review #17, by MissIncendio Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

19th December 2011:
Amazing story! :) Is there going to be another chapter though?

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Yes, eventually there will be another chapter, although I am not certain when.

Thanks for your review. :)

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Review #18, by GinnyMione Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

4th November 2011:

Author's Response: I'm so thrilled you've enjoyed it so far! :)

Keep an eye out for the third instalment of the epilogue - it may be a while, but it will come eventually!

Thanks so much for the review.

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Review #19, by hanna Chapter Nineteen: Bare

19th October 2011:
i really dont like the way everything turned out.. The misccarraige made this whole story sad and i can't imagine how things will get better. I want to know how its going to end, but im afraid of being dissapointed. Just my thought.. Great story up till the miscaraige part hopefully it will get better :)

Author's Response: Just keep reading and let me know what you think! I know the decision to have Rose miscarry was huge for me, but it really changed up the cliche pregnant-at-Hogwarts storyline. In reality, the characters are still really young and still have a lot of growing up to do.

Regardless, I really appreciate your review! :)

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Review #20, by Elizabeth Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

1st September 2011:
Absolutely Amazing! I love it!! and I love how it took a fight!! You are a very good author!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you loved reading it! I truly appreciate you taking the time to review. :)

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Review #21, by RoseWeasleyMalfoy1996 Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

23rd August 2011:
You did a good job on this fan fiction. I love it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Review #22, by Lollipop1123 Chapter Eighteen: Fault

12th August 2011:
Awww I feel soo bad for Scorpius. Great story by the way, I can't stop reading it!

Author's Response: I know. Scorpius is just getting knocked down repeatedly.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #23, by Ginnys_x _heart Chapter Twenty-six: End Part I

9th July 2011:
Great chapter, I like the way you've given everyone's reactions, especially Ron's. I love how the sections flow together, the only thing I noticed is the date on the last section - 'March 2028' should that be '2038'? because the one before is 'December 2037'. Can't wait to read the last chapter! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)

And thanks for catching the typo. I'll fix that as soon as possible!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #24, by PinkTori13 Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

6th July 2011:
YAY! I'm so glad you're doing a third part :)

Author's Response: Haha yes. :)

Thanks for the review!

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Review #25, by ginnygirl808 Chapter Twenty-seven: End Part II

5th July 2011:
yay!! another chapter that excites me alot!! yay keep up the good work! update soon!! :)

Author's Response: It's so good to hear from excited readers! Thanks for the review! :)

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