Great Job! Fabulous chapter, your writing just keeps getting better. And don't worry, it won't even take ten years before you look back an your writing and be like "Huh?". I do that to what I wrote a week ago! Haha. Great job, update soon! 10/10 ~Alassie!~Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't think this chapter was all too good actually. . . But thanks a lot for reviewing, you got the Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans! Report Review
This is a very interesting start to something that has alot of potential. Keep up the good work and update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much! It makes me really happy [:D] to see a review and that somebody likes my work. I was going to modify it a bit (the grammar needs work) but I don't think I will. I'll try to make it very enjoyble for me to write and if possible, for others to read. Report Review
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