oooh, interesting. The fight scene was exceptionally good. Wishing you would add more to this, but you are obviously not going to, shame really. Loved it lots, dorapadfoot.Author's Response: Really? More? I was afraid that the tweaking of the ages was a bit much. Thanks for the compliment and the wonderful review! Report Review
This is really well done. You have wonderful description. You mentioned the age is wrong for a reason, so I'll accept that. I could see something like that happening, and you wrote it really well! Well done!
PS I love Peeves's song!Author's Response: Thank you so VERY much for this review, I appreciate this! Yes, I changed their ages to make it possible. I'm glad you liked the description; I try really hard on that aspect.
I love the song and have to thank everyone at the forums for helping me out with it!
Again, thank you very much. Report Review
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