Cute story! A little short though. But I liked it a lot! Report Review
hahahah this is helarious! i'm going to bed with a smile.
however i think the time is alittle off when it comes to the kids, because Rose and Al are the same age and so ar Hugo and Lily. So Ron and hermione would of marry atleast or while Rose was beeing cooked in the oven .
Keep it up.
MELAuthor's Response: lol. it ignores all of dh. i went back in and changed the names afterwards, but it was written before hand. Report Review
I truly like the story and the banter between friends. Look forward to the next chapter. Report Review
flipping amazing this is one of the funniest stories i have ever readAuthor's Response: Thanks. for the comment. it made my day. ^^ Report Review
Cute...a little short...but cuteAuthor's Response: yeah, i know it was short but it was supposed to be.thanks for the comment though Report Review
*laughing!* wow that was such a funny story...do you think i should have told him to put on hios shoes!!! that was a funny line! this story was very well written and is very funny! amazing job =]]]
10/10Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Very cute and funny. Poor nervous Ron. I liked it a lot. :)Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading. Report Review
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