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Review #1, by Siriius Death is Unforgiving

29th April 2009:
Oh my god! Not many stories actually have made me cry but this seriously made my eyes bawl out D; Remus and Tonks were my favorite couple and two of my favorite characters; I was so sad to read about them dying!
This one shot was amazing in so many ways; the emotions were fantastically written. Ah, you have a knack for writing R/T! I say you continue writing it :D I'd love to read more from you.
Great one-shot. Enjoyed it immensely. 10/10 (;

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Review #2, by The Last Marauder Death is Unforgiving

26th March 2009:
This was so sad and so heartbreaking but I loved it! I really liked how it was written in the first person, it is so much more personal that way! I also think that you really hit the characters of Remus and Tonks spot on. Well done! :) The ending with Teddy waking up was also just so so so sad, but perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you! I worked really hard on it...
I hope it wasn't too confusing. Or cliche.

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Review #3, by Japanime Death is Unforgiving

7th June 2008:
...O...M...G... -Bawls her eyes out.-

That was was so sad!!! -Cries more.- So moving and truthful to how I would have imagined their deaths to be, had J.K. put that 'missing scene' in.

This was written amazingly, I must say, because not many 'sad' stories actually get me to tear-up as much as this one has... Poor Teddy!! ;-;

Remus and Tonks have been a favorite couple of mine ever since HBP. They fit together so well! I was definitely depressed when they died in the books...but at least I had this to read, which while sad, captured them so beautifully. Remus, especially, though. ...He would have thought himself to be the first to die, and James the last, and it wasn't that way at all and...awww...I'm going to tear up again. ='(

And the curse that finally did him in? ...Ten times more admirable than just a plain killing gave so much more meaning to the death of the last of the great Marauders.

Anyway, this review is long enough as it is, right? x3 GREAT JOB, and I'd love to read anything else you write. 10/10! Keep it up!

Lotsa love,


Author's Response: YAY! Thank you so much! I feel so happy now!
Remus and Tonks are the best freaking couple ever! I was so so SO happy when my two favorite characters in the Harry Potter books got togather, AND they made such a great couple! Thanks so much for the great review! Your stories are amazing and hilarious as well, I hope you know.

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Review #4, by thedarkpoet Death is Unforgiving

6th June 2008:
awww. ;(, that's so sad...wonderful, but sad!
a nice "missing moment"


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Remus and Tonks were my favorite characters ever. I hated it when they died, but I had to write about it or I would feel guilty. Also, I don't think a mere Killing Curse could kill Remus and all his awesomeness. Thanks for the review!

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Review #5, by Weasleys Forever Death is Unforgiving

6th June 2008:
Well written. So sad. I always cry when I read about Tonks and Remus dying and leaving Teddy behind.

Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Remus and Tonks. I think they are the best book couple ever! There's the "insecure", self-loathing, outcast werewolf, and then the young, bright, un-prejudiced girl. I think they compliment eachother so nicely.
This is my first story on this sight that is actually good. Thanks for the review!

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