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Review #1, by FleurDeLaAnnoyed Fire

28th March 2016:
WHAT EVEN IS THIS??? i'm sorry, but i do not support americans abroad, zey are obnoxious and 'orrible...

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Review #2, by Gryffin Fire

28th March 2016:
There are some inconsistencies in this (for example, i'm pretty sure everyone would recognize the smell of smoke even if they weren't from San Diego) but was overall a pretty good story! Some of the dialogue got a bit inane, but you sound young so that's okay.

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Review #3, by ginnyevans Fire

28th March 2016:
"the bag hanging at her waist was her blanket given to her at birth, her digital camera, a brush, her diary, a book to pass the time away, and cat food"
lol, classic

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