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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lucy Morag

1st November 2008:

lovely story- very intriguing- keep writing please!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm rewriting the first chapters before posting any new ones. I hope I will be posting a new chapter soon!

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Review #2, by Leeloo

Dazed and Confused

29th October 2008:

Great story so far... I liked a lot the way you began telling it, the letters were amazing. A bit confusing at first, bu then I thought that must've been your intention by throwing them just like that. Original thing, really.

This second chapter was interesting as well. I would've liked to know more about Isabel from Dumbledore, but I guess you chose to disclose your information in small amounts...

I certainly hope you post your next chapter soon enough, can't wait to meet Pauline!

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Review #3, by Hedwig

Dazed and Confused

6th October 2008:

I liked this second chapter, though I'm not sure about how you chracterize Ginny... it doesn't seem like her. I can't wait to read chapter 3!

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Review #4, by Hedwig

Yesterday's Letters

6th October 2008:

I guess you've managed to set a good start for the story, I'm intrigued about Isabel! You also had some funny bits in there, I liked the way you portraided Ron. On to next chapter...

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Review #5, by KT

Yesterday's Letters

3rd October 2008:

I want to read more, plz...

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Review #6, by Lilian

Yesterday's Letters

1st October 2008:

This story looks promising, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

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