lovely story- very intriguing- keep writing please!Author's Response: Thank you. I'm rewriting the first chapters before posting any new ones. I hope I will be posting a new chapter soon! Report Review
Great story so far... I liked a lot the way you began telling it, the letters were amazing. A bit confusing at first, bu then I thought that must've been your intention by throwing them just like that. Original thing, really.
This second chapter was interesting as well. I would've liked to know more about Isabel from Dumbledore, but I guess you chose to disclose your information in small amounts...
I certainly hope you post your next chapter soon enough, can't wait to meet Pauline! Report Review
I liked this second chapter, though I'm not sure about how you chracterize Ginny... it doesn't seem like her. I can't wait to read chapter 3! Report Review
I guess you've managed to set a good start for the story, I'm intrigued about Isabel! You also had some funny bits in there, I liked the way you portraided Ron. On to next chapter... Report Review
I want to read more, plz... Report Review
This story looks promising, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Report Review
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