Well I've never been a fan of Harry/Parvati, but I decided that since I love your writing, I would give it a chance, and I'm very glad I did! Although they still wouldn't be my choice for a couple, this story was still very cute and well-written! You characterized Parvati very well, which is difficult to do since she is a minor character. I think it would have been entirely possible that Parvati had an interest in Harry before he asked her to the ball (especially because Dean says that she and her sister are the best looking girls in the year, so it seems plausible that she'd be waiting for Harry). This story also inspired me to listen to the song and I'd never listened to the full version and I love it! :) Great job!
Sabrina :) Report Review
10/10 I love it
I have always been interested in this pairing and this is a great story for it. It admits harry didn't like her before but it still conveys the point that they fancy each other. Report Review
I am a big fan of your work, and this one didn't disapoint!Author's Response: Aww thank you! This review put a much needed smile on my face. :) Report Review
Loved it!! So. did he say "I love you." . you should have added that, i think, but besides that, AWESOME!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah those were indeed the words Harry said. I originally did include them, but people told me that it was a little sudden and not something Harry would say, so I took them off to leave it a little mysterious and ambiguous. If you guessed though then that is good! Means I imply the exact meaning that I meant to imply. :) Cheers for the review! Report Review
aww cute fic. This needs a sequel!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Lol! You say that with all my stories, dont you? :P Glad you liked this one too!
Rose :) Report Review
That was so sweet! Normally, i'm not a person that enjoy's romances; i'm a tragedy person myself, but this story is one of the well-written and enjoyable romances i've read so far. Good job! It was interesting hearing from Parvati's pov.Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed, and that you found it engaging even though you would normally read tragedies rather than romance (it says a lot for my story's appeal that you picked it to read even, given that!) And yes, I kind of thought that there were not enough Harry/Parvati stories enough, especially centered on Parvati herself, so the plot bunnies started hopping!
Rose :) Report Review
Awww! This was so cute! I love Parvati/Harry! Very nicely written =]Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed! :) Report Review
The Boy Who Wouldn't Dance... I love it! This was great!Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! :) Report Review
Please fogive me for taking this long to come by and review after your request in July!! I won't bore you with my exucses. I am very sorry!
Anyway, on to reviewing. this is a very unsual pairing, not one I would have thought of (says the girl who wrote a Harry/Lavender one shot! lol). These two have much more potential due to the Yule Ball.
I liked how you explored Parvati's feelings throughout, we were never in doubt of her feelings and I felt sorry for her on more than one occassion!
This did feel a little long, but I don't think anything needs to be taken out as it all slotted neatly together. I'm quite glad you didn't go into any of Harry's thoughts and feelings until the end as it was nice to read something purely about Pravati. Although we can still see poor Harry's cluelessness (if that's a word lol) about girls. He really wouldn't catch on to the Would you Ever answer lol.
I enjoyed reading this, I'm always open to unusual couples and it's nice to read something else of yours, I remember you requested the story about the Flight of the Snidget.
You have a very nice writing style and I enjoy reading your work. Keep it up! Report Review
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